Reviews for Invisible Touch
firstcatfish chapter 6 . 11/15/2013
I really liked this story. It was a bit sappy, but the theme of different love languages was worth it. Words without action are empty, but action without the words is sometimes just as bad. Good job and thanks for sharing it with us.
ziggy.uk chapter 6 . 9/24/2013
Fantastic final chapter. Dean and John weren't mad with Sam and they actually got it and talked. Just loved the huge chick flick moment but they all needed it. Great that they banished the spirit for good, working as a team and that Sam visited the garden and left Amelia the lilac seeds, which immediately grew! Perfect last few lines, Sam got Dean good there!
A really great read, thanks
ziggy.uk chapter 5 . 9/24/2013
Great that Dean and John's words caused Sam flicker into visibility before becoming invisible again and that Dean then figured out what he needed to say to bring Sam back permanently. But, oh dear, Amelia appearing and saying Sam wished to disappear may not be the best thing, but hopefully it won't end as bad as Sam thinks it will and they won't be as mad as he is expecting.
ziggy.uk chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
Wow, didn't see that coming, on top of Sam being invisible a spirit entering where John and Dean had paced away the salt line. Thank goodness Sam managed to stop it knifing Dean but now Sam is injured by it, will they be able to see his blood or will that be invisible too? And loved Dean's apology to Sam ended by Dean asking him to give him a sign! At least now John has banished the spirit for good.
ziggy.uk chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
Yay, Sam has finally got through to Dean and John and John has worked out Sam isn't dead and it must be some sort of curse or something. And so nice for Sam to hear the concern of his father, like it was before he hit his questioning teenage years. Just hope John is still like that once Sam is visible again.
ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 9/24/2013
Poor Sam invisible to everybody but at least he has heard what Dean and John have said and those were words he needed to hear. Wonder if there is any way for him to alert his family of his presence ... and what will it take for Sam's unintentional wish to be reversed.
ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Great first chapter, and a totally believable scenario, John and Sam arguing, but heartbreaking for Sam to hear Dean take their dad's side. Just who is this mysterious Amelia, from her description she is no normal girl, and Sam may regret having opened up so much to her.
sami1010220 chapter 6 . 12/11/2012
sweet and angsty, the best kind of fic, lol. good job!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2012
Oh a wonderful story with a perfect ending although I didn't want it to end 3
3DBABE1999 chapter 6 . 10/3/2012
I LOVED this! It was TO PERFECT and SO SWEET! BRILLIANT writing!
yellow-craion chapter 6 . 9/28/2012
I had so much fun reading this! It's very well written, you kept them all in character and I can easily see it happening.
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
So... yes, I started to cry during chapter two, and never stopped. I LOVE this story. I really do. You portray the characters wonderfully and if it wasn't 1am, I'd give you a fuller, more epic review, but just know I'll be rereading it (and probably crying again) tomorrow. :D Very nicely done.

Also, awesome that Amelia is a faerie. :D

Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 6 . 6/11/2012
Great story.
Headoverheels14 chapter 6 . 4/6/2012
So cute love it! I am addicted to your lovely writing talents!
ArmedWithMyComputer chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Hey :) I just found this story, and I really like it! This was such a cool idea, and I really loved it :) Great job :D

~ ArmedWithMyComputer xxx
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