Reviews for Another World That Wasn't What It Had Promised To
snake of slytherin chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
nice short story!

Please go on writing!
AJeff chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
Beautifully written. Hope you'll write more.
anamcharalove chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
That was a nice short story. However, I think it would have been nice if you had Miss Parker meet Jarod on the Web or something. Just an idea for a sequel. I think you did well for English not being your first language. Hoping for a sequel!