Reviews for With This Ring
unfaithfullchild chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Priceless!
A-game chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
As he opened his mouth, small fangs glinting, the purple ring was whisked out of danger and instantly vanished into the depths of Miroku's robes. The kit glared ferociously up at the serene monk even as his head rang from the force of his jaws snapping shut. "Too many sweets aren't good for you, Shippo," Miroku smoothly intoned. "Besides, this is an adult treat… definitely not for children!"
Shippo pulled an impressive pout that didn't faze the monk in the least. "You just want to enjoy it yourself," he accused darkly.
"Not at all; I intend on sharing this with a lady," Miroku retorted absently, mentally plotting his umpteenth approach to a certain curvaceous slayer and gleefully anticipating the lascivious activities he hoped would result.
"You're gonna let Kaede in on the action, but not me?" Shippo demanded, appalled at this gross inequality, and wondered why the monk turned a sickly shade of green.

Doncha just LOVE Shippo? I literally yelled laughing on my bed,'I LOVE YOU SHIPPO!' and continued to laugh like crazy at the though of Miroku's sickened face. TAKE NOTE : NO ONE WAS THERE WHEN I YELLED MY LOVE...onlt the cat...
ChocolateReader chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
beautifully real.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
LOVE IT. LOVE IT.
ninjamidori chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
SO FREAKING GREAT!
OokamiOngaku chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Hadn't realized I already had this story of yours in my favorites! _

Still love this!
The Red Leper chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Haha totally great. I love the last line! Wonderful buildup! Is there a sequel where Miroku gets his turn? Cause that would be great too! Thanks for this pick me up
XxxInuYashaLoverxxX chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
haha, she's still thinking about hte backpack at the end! XD
Raven-2010 chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Beautiful story and plot,the parts with the cock ring holy crap LMAO on that, I love the last sentance I forgive you for snooping in my bag ROFL (_)

Raven
Aryea2468 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
i don't think it's called a COCK RING, but it's called a condum!
pApAw chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
that was so nice ;P

love it

-paw
x.Janele.x chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Very cute, I loved Inuyasha's reactions in the beginning. He was so naive lol. The change from a naive Inuyasha to a "I've always wanted you" one gave me a bit of pause, since it didn't really fit in with the beginning. But since you said you added the end later on, I'll cut you some slack lol. And hey, Kagome had condoms in her backpack for later on :D
kitty-gurl1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
lol one of these fics eh?

it was a really sweet fic tho!

silly shippo XD he'll never lose his place in kagome's arms cause she's his mom XD well "honorary mom"

really loved the funny ending too
VivaciousVixen chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Beautifully written, I loved this story. Nearly stopped reading at the cock ring bit though..but when he said the thing about birds I died and had to continue on. Fantastic work, I hope you come back to and see this review.
ObsidianPhantom chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Damn! That was delicious. Gotta love Inuyasha and Oh did you write him perfectly...I really don't know where to start with this story...only that the interactions were *squeals* and the tension...Hmmm.

Love this story...It was awesome..Inuyasha is SOOO kool..XD
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