Reviews for Secrets of the Past
Guest chapter 5 . 6/1
Unrealistic and silly. The rescue attempt should been more organized.
If Ash was kidnapped everybody he befriended would notice
Aizen Sosuke-Sama chapter 10 . 11/8/2015
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
Giovanni already met Ash in the films... Plus Ash is always on TV during league battles and the 2 separate times with Lugia and Unknown (and Entai in film 2 or 3 I can't remember) so he'd know who Ash is from that or the Gym league leaders meeting right? Big plot gap there for any fan of the show/films!
Sailor Pandabear chapter 10 . 8/3/2014
funny end. um... but it seems lacking. oh well. it made me giggle and feel tense so your writing is ok.
Aura fighter chapter 7 . 6/14/2014
Heh, reminds me of Danny Phantom
Guest chapter 10 . 4/13/2014
lol that slapping part was funny once again LOL!
Angmars pride chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
hahaha like it
DragonFire Princess chapter 10 . 6/6/2013
The Reader Of Fanfics chapter 10 . 6/1/2013
Great Story!
Cyndasaur chapter 2 . 3/18/2013
This fic is great, though you use the word 'stated' to much!
MoonlitShadowsoftheHumanSoul chapter 10 . 12/11/2012
One word that describes this: Awesome. EVERYONE!IF THE OLD POKEMON ARE BETTER THAN THE OLD, SAY 'YEAH'
dinoman94 chapter 9 . 8/14/2012
What's with the repeat?
MegaKiraraLover chapter 9 . 5/18/2012
erm, you double-updated...kind of. like, the chapter is on here twice, one right after the other. it's not even two different versions of the chapter; it's the same chapter. you may want to fix that...?
Coolie chapter 10 . 5/10/2012
AdventureWriter28 chapter 10 . 5/22/2010
great story! :)you inspired me to make a fanfiction about who is ash's dad :) thanks! but it will take me time to make a story about ash's dad though because i have to finish my other stories first :) thanks really! :)
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