Reviews for Harry Potter and the Chosen of Hogwarts
YamiYugiYuki chapter 4 . 10/19/2014
Please update it's a really good story
Legend of Today chapter 4 . 8/3/2014
Oh come on! Cliffhanger! Seriously, though... You should totally keep writing! I am absolutely in love with this story!
Sakihinata chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
Ok, the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter was just great! I felt myself shocked, like I'd been the one surprised ;) I quite love the story and hope it will continue.
BeautifulLotus chapter 4 . 11/23/2013
I want more
crimson-angel08 chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
This story is purely interesting I want more please...:))))
MsQueenWitch chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
Really good stoyy you. Should finish it it
WilliowDrake chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
I loved the story and I would like more. So when you get a chance can you add some more chapters please and thank you.
moonprincess97524 chapter 4 . 2/27/2012
This is such a wonderful wonderful story so far. I am looking forward to learning how old Harry was when his parents died and if an explaination is going to be given about Paddfoot's reaction to the Potter's death as to why he would kill muggles when it was Death Eaters that did the deed. I LOVE that you made Harry look different then the "normal" carbon of his dad. Thank you for this wonderful favorite and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Milamb chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Love this story !

Hope one day you will write the end !
sev's-sexy-mistress chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Please to this story. It is skool amazing and I can't wait to hear more. One of the best stories I read in a while and it only has 4 come back...Severus looked at harrys tattoos while he was unconscious because of the transition...does that not mean he broke taboo? Just wondering:)
Phoenix avis chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Usually I do not read fics that have been left uncompleted for so long (if I really like them is quite fustrating!) but I decided to give it a try, don't know why. I loved it. I have seen you are still writting other fics and I really think, if at all possible, you should pick this up again; it is well writen, has good characters, nice rithm and a promising plot, it would be a pitty to leave it like that.

Anyhow, if you are just not inspired, I am just glad I got to read these four chapters.
Alice Hell chapter 4 . 3/31/2011
I know it's a been a long time since you've updated... but it's really good and I you shouldn't give up on it!



Rattana chapter 4 . 1/22/2011
I just stumpled upon this story today by pure accident. But I'm glad I did. It is very well written and quite ... catching (in lacking knowledge of a better word).

Sometimes it felt like some words were missing in a sentence or some spelling didn't go the way it was supposed to. But next to that the rest is really, really amazing.

What I like about this story even more are the quotes at the beginning of each chapter and the headlines which give you a feeling for the timeline in this story. (even though i seem to keep skipping them...)

I hope that you might continue writing even though it seems like it has been on a rather long hiatus.

My best wishes to you.
fanficfan chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
"Privet Drive, Little Whinging, Surrey was a place of poise. People who lived there were well off, respectable, married couples that drove minivans. There weren't any people who had been married in Vegas, or had went to jail, or had even gotten a speeding ticket. "

Just a little fyi: the British don't have minivans like Americans do, at least not back in the 90's. It might be better to say they drive station wagons. And the British definitely don't go to Vegas like Americans do (it's a 14 hour flight for them!). They'd more likely go to Monte Carlo, though I don't know if they have the same lax marriage laws that make Vegas so notorious.

Just thought you might want to know that your very first paragraph contains so many cultural mistakes.
Rielle P chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Amazing! I love this so much... its hard to find good novel rewrites and you make this absolutely lovable!

Cant wait to see more!
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