|Reviews for All For One, One For Both Being a Spirit Sucks|
| shookenuppepsi chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
Love this what-if scenario.
| sami1010220 chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Aw, cute ending!
| lillelouis chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
Very, very well done. AU stories based on pivotal moments on the show have an unfortunate tendency to be slightly forced in places, but I didn't get that at all here. Everything flowed nicely and this could'a been written for the show for all I know.
And the thing that's gonna make me go check out your other stories is how well you write Angry!Dean. God that was amazing... :D
| Rolletti chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
THANK YOU no one died! I love it. This story was an emotional roller coaster, wondering who was going to actually die and hopefully come back. Urgh! I loved how everyone was willing to die for the other and how Dean, even as a spirit, fought hard for his baby brother.
Give yourself a pat on the back for a very well written story.
| wolfish-willow chapter 3 . 11/22/2010
I loved this so much! AUs for these episodes don't always work for me, but this one felt like it /could/ have happened and still been canon. You got their voices just right (especially Dean) and you totally rock! 333 Great fic.
| Holly Lukeman chapter 3 . 1/4/2009
It's almost ridiculous how much I've enjoyed this story. I've surprised myself with how much fun I had reading it. This chapter is on the same level as the previous two and was very entertaining.
I'm not entirely sure what happened with Dean and the Demon, but I'm not sure any of the others really know either, so I guess it's all good. The important thing is that Dean is still breathing and will be able to soundly throttle his brother for trying to sell his soul. I'm not even going to approach how hypocritical he'll end up being (All Hell Breaks Loose hurts no matter how many times I watch it). The moment between the Winchester boys was touching and believable, including Dean's bargaining with the nurse to get in to see Sam.
A great concluding chapter. I enjoyed this story a lot. Good job.
| Holly Lukeman chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
This chapter was equally good. I like how you kind of amped up Dean being able to move stuff as a spirit because of how angry he was. I felt bad for John in this situation, having to have one of his sons near death and the other near selling himself to a demon.
Great job on the atmosphere of the story - it had me anxious and on the edge of my seat. You use a style that's appropriately succinct and yet expansive when need be; it's the kind of style I look for in a story. Not too much extra stuff, not too little.
Once again, really good job.
| Holly Lukeman chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Wow, this is a really good idea for a story. As soon as I saw it, I was interested to see how Sam would get involved with the demon deal. I liked this chapter a lot, especially the emotions you managed to bring to each character, even the devious greed of the Yellow Eyed Demon. The only thing I had a little trouble believing was John walking away so easily to think about the deal, but that wasn't anywhere near a bit issue. The rest was spot on with characterizations, and I enjoyed every minute.
The dialog is good, the plot is incredibly entertaining, and I can't wait to read more.
| vampyfreak chapter 3 . 10/20/2008
| Just A Tad Bit Fanatic chapter 3 . 10/13/2008
this was a really good story are you gonna do the rest of the show with John in it?
| Rat chapter 3 . 5/5/2008
Very lucky indeed. great fic!
| SUPERNATANGEL67 chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
Great little fic on one of my all time fave eppies! Will look forward to reading more of your fics.
| carocali chapter 3 . 3/20/2008
Interesting twist on your AU take of 'IMTOD.' I like that Dean followed Sam around, and I like that Sam followed John to catch him with The Demon. Cool little triangle!
Thanks for sharing!