Reviews for Finding Closure
LolaluvsEdward chapter 4 . 12/14/2008
The story is good but is going at a really fast pace.
DawnOfDays chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
not the best chap but not bad. even though bella can be depressing at times im sure i can bear through it till she gets better:)
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 3 . 9/21/2008
I love it!
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
I love it!
ixmissxmyxmind chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
i love it!
NightmaresAtMidnight chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
That man who was mean to Blla can die. Bluntly said but true.
DawnOfDays chapter 3 . 8/3/2008
its cool that we get to learn Alice's past. i hope Bella doesn't have to be sad for too long
K.C.4evr chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
OMG, keep writing, I love your story and I can't wait until you write again!
Elwine-Amrys chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
I really like this story so update soon! Sorry its not more helpful but i'm really tired lately so my reviews are kinda incoherent lol. anyway yeah its a really good story i like the concept too it
UrJustAsSaneAsIAm chapter 3 . 8/2/2008
it is very well written and i can practically feel what bella is thinking! cant wait to read more
xXM'n'MXx chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
okay, so you asked for an idea on how Edward got with the Cullens, so here it is:

1:you could do it like the book so Edward's parents died of the desease, then he went to the adoption agency, and they adopted him.


2:you could make something up like they were driving home and a drunk driver hit them. It was a huge accident and they didn't make it out.

or you could make it more complicated

3:you could say somthing like Edward snuck out to go to a party that his parents wouldn't let him go to, then his parents came and got him and they were furriously mad and got killed by a drunk driver. Edward blames himself for the entire thing, and maybe that's why he doesn't love anyone or anything besides the piano. That would make it really hard on him, and make BXE hard to accomplish, but it should also make it more exciting.

Gosh, that was long,

Hope that helps a bit :)
xXM'n'MXx chapter 2 . 7/22/2008
it's really good so far, and I'm looking frward to reading the rest.

Can you have some EPOV's in future chapters?
l'heure bleue chapter 2 . 5/6/2008

Wow. I really love it. Your writing is amazing!

Update soon? Please?

Basil-Kaine chapter 2 . 5/5/2008
keep it up. it is really good. so i want to see more. )
AllisonIsAllison chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
I love the story and please update soon!
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