|Reviews for Dimension Father|
| MayeGirl chapter 43 . 3/2
| MayeGirl chapter 27 . 3/1
You literally had me in tears here.
| honore chapter 43 . 2/24
I loved the problems that they went through but I truly enjoyed the resolution. Thanks for that. Looking forward to more. Thanks
| TheBeauty chapter 43 . 2/11
Lovely story :)
| ChasityGeek chapter 43 . 2/10
I liked this chapter.
| ChasityGeek chapter 1 . 2/10
*excuse not accuse
| Nan7 chapter 43 . 2/7
It's been awhile since I last read a HP fanfiction, but recent event on the news, made me want to come back! I've always been a fan of stories of Harry being sent to another world, but couldn't find really good ones out there. So I was really happy that I found yours 2 days ago and didn't stop till right now.
| SilverShadowSoul chapter 43 . 1/28
| Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 43 . 1/10
| Chia chapter 24 . 1/4
I really like this story but it's really hard to read, your tense is all over the place, as is your spelling and some sentences just don't make sense. Don't get me wrong, I know what you're trying to say but frankly, constantly correcting everything in my head is becoming exhausting so I'm going to stop here.
| Mrs.Harry Potter chapter 43 . 1/2
That was absolutely PERFECT! It just was and that is all I can say about this beautifully magnificent fanfiction.
| PhantomBowtie chapter 43 . 12/29/2013
I absolutely loved this story! It, unlike many others, took me on the up-and-down rollercoaster of the story-it wasn't specifically predictable, and I admit that I cried at several points in it. Brilliant, brilliant job!
| Ana chapter 43 . 12/27/2013
U know, usually i dont read time travels and this kind of AU, even more in english since im brazilian. But i loved reading ur fanfic, really! I loved it and it was really well writen. Congrats! Im sorry for the bad english
| JustTryingToHelp chapter 19 . 12/24/2013
This is overall a good story. Plot is well thought out and looks promising. Characterisation seems good - James is having a great reaction to Harry so far, very realistic!
However, you seem to have a massive issue with grammar. There are speeding errors and word switches all over the place, but they could be fixed through simple proof reading.
You don't seem to conjugate verbs very well - you repeatedly use "is" instead of "are" and you are fairly consistent in this error, so I'm guessing you don't realise it's wrong? Percy and Rora ARE still missing. Percy IS still missing. If you have two or more people, you use the 3rd person plural form of the verb. :)
Another issue I've have spotted is in which tense you use. The story is mostly in the past tense, so words like "can" and "is" should only be used in dialogue, which a few extreme exceptions.
But overall the story is great - in my opinion that makes up for flaws in grammar.
| Tigerbella101 chapter 43 . 12/4/2013