Reviews for Dimension Father
Jen chapter 14 . 3/9
Garyback, lol
Juliethobo chapter 22 . 3/4
This is a good story but as you go on your word choice gets worse and worst. Hermione is not married so you would not call Mrs. That was the straw that broke the camels back for me I can't hold my tongue any longer. Ugh get a better proofreader.
Mentathial chapter 43 . 2/28
wow...this..this was beautiful.
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 2/27
Interesting chapter and plot and amazingly idea
ironhair chapter 15 . 2/25
A bit emo but a nice read
Eleazar Black chapter 10 . 2/15
Crazy13anana chapter 43 . 1/29
Your writing style is incredible, you have no idea how many times I cried while reading this.
But I cant believe that tonks died
But that doesnt stop me from having that warm fuzzy feeling that you get after a happy ending, I you for it!
ellie chapter 32 . 1/29
Crazy13anana chapter 27 . 1/29
This chapter was amazing, it made me cry
Pureblood Mask chapter 19 . 1/17
I'm so confused. At one point you write, "He overheard Arthur calling HER Aurora..." and then another, "In his world HE was the Weasley's seventh SON." Also in a previous chapter, Aurora's middle name is Arthur. Who is Aurora, a girl or boy?
slytherinrenny chapter 43 . 1/2
this was so...OMG! I loved it so much, it is so unique up had me in tears at some parts! You are such a talented writer! Keep up the awesome work! -Slyth
Birdy1020 chapter 24 . 10/13/2016
you keep spelling 'month' mouth
Anna chapter 43 . 10/11/2016
Amazing story! Thanks you :)
Ria0207 chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
Really don't know how this story is even remotely popular... Feels like it's been written by a 10-year-old. Waste of my time.
The Dementors Dinner Party chapter 42 . 7/4/2016
NOOOO! WHY SEVERUS SNAPE!? It was a great story! The characters were in character, the battles were epic, I LOVED Sirius, why Severus Snape die!? and everything was just PERFECT! You did a great job. I liked the emotional rolarcoaster between Harry and James. You don't get these fanfictions a lot where you read them A SECOND TIME but it's great to read it! Yes, I read this two times and both times I enjoyed it. Aurora Weasley was certainly a new character and I wonder what Arthur and Molly or the other Weasley brothers and sister in Harry's world would think when they find out about her. Sally Harsh was an interesting character and Elise was amazing! Sirius was just so funny!

James was totally cool and I imagine that will be a person's reaction to having a suppose to be dead son back from another world. It was great to hear how much he healed because of Harry being there and how much also changed like Neville and Hermione's confidence. The idea that Arthur and Molly split up somewhere put me in shock but it was a great idea and it made the plot even more interesting. And that Severus Snape didn't loathe the marauders as much anymore because of war was amazing!

I think my favorite chapter is where Sirius and Remus switched. Just to imagine those two switched paints DISASTER all over it in huge, black letters. This was certainly a great fic and I enjoyed it both times and I know I said it twice but it deserves to be said again...written again...or something. Well this was a great story and I am eager to check out all your other Potter stories as well.

So even if there were some spelling mistakes and some problems with the sentences put together, it was amazing and made me smile, laugh and think about it a lot. Keep it up!

- The Dementors Dinner Party.
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