Reviews for Last Rivalry
Anonymous chapter 2 . 6/5/2015
/ R.I.P. \
Here lies
Staryumie chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
That's the reason of why you must be careful with drugs ;)
Charlotte chapter 16 . 5/20/2013
I love love love pokemon chapter books and your is the best I ever read thanks for the great story
pyroguardian-of-thewhiteflame chapter 16 . 9/14/2012
...What's missingno?And you did great except the fact of the chapter sizes...they're pretty small considering the pokemon fic average,but whatever you still did good.n.m. the beta reader
ForeverAWSOMEAuraSpaceDragon chapter 10 . 10/29/2011
What do you have against Mudkips? THEY'RE CUTE!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/30/2011
Darkpetal16 chapter 16 . 1/15/2011
D Awww... no more squashing the mudkips or going on a drunken rampage... -cry- D But still~ Awesome story, love it~~ (Especially Kyogre getting her revenge ] )
Darkpetal16 chapter 10 . 1/15/2011
XD! Oh. My. Gawd.

1.) The cake. Love the cake.

"Will there be cake?"

"" Kyogre stammered.

"I knew it! THE CAKE IS A LIE!" Grouddon yelled

2.) The ending. You. Are. A. GENIUS! *BOWS*

"Then Groudon saw that one of the trainers sent out a Mudkip."
Darkpetal16 chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
Let's heart it for PMS!

P- Prehistorical

M- Monster

S- Syndrome

Darkpetal16 chapter 6 . 1/15/2011
Mew the klutz? Nice! XD
Darkpetal16 chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Drunk Groudon Funny as Hell Groudon D!

"GET AWA' FROM MEH, WOMAN! Besides, these people lov' it!" Groudon hiccupped."

Hehehehehe... oh if only Kyogre had it on video... can you say perfect blackmail?
Darkpetal16 chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
"RAID!" XD My god, this is so funny! Orbshipping~~
Darkpetal16 chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
LOL! Holy... wow I laughed so hard..


ROFL! XD! Cannot stop laughing at that! That was spectacular, great job.
Echos of 2008-2009 chapter 14 . 9/12/2009
reallyu good story! 5/5

now just i little question. where groudon asked kyogre if she wanted to sleep in his bed with her did you mean that in a sweet way or the perverted way?
Alykon chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
NO! :(:(:( abuse against mudkips Alykon say NO!

even missingno/mudkip ish ones (lol)

i like this story :D
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