Reviews for How a bet changed Everything
We-Intertwine-Like-Vine chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
I love the story... but its too focused on Derek and Casey. What about Emily and their family?
snixor chapter 4 . 6/3/2009
Totally loving the story, but the dialogue just feels so out of character, Derek is a lot more shallow, I mean I would believe that hed have difficulty talking to someone such as Casey without even a tiny hint of sarcasism is a little disbelieving. And with Casey...her dialogue is just so un-Caseyish. She isnt that shy AT ALL as a matter of fact shes a bold person. This just feels so wrong. Another thing, work on grammar a bit. Just think do you talk like that?

* If you do, get help you may have some twisted speaking disorder.*

Not TRYING to be mean. Just TRYING to help...Sorry. Its a good story though im enjoying it.
anonyiac chapter 15 . 2/15/2009
aww thats such a cute ending... -
anonyiac chapter 11 . 2/15/2009
wow marti really is a lifesaver...shes their i just can't help get the feeling that the next time they really will get busted though..eek...but i'll keep reading just to see -
anonyiac chapter 6 . 2/15/2009
hahaha i like that last statement.."ok so maybe it wasn't that long." hahaha -
Alice Cullen 1534 chapter 9 . 12/23/2008
ok so a pregnancy test doesn't work that fast. and also a girl won't start puking until at least 4 weeks

and this story should be T not M.
minipoison chapter 16 . 10/11/2008
cant wait to read the sequel!

Kalina Shattered chapter 16 . 8/17/2008
This was a good story, followed along with the show more than I thought it would. Congrats and I can't wait to start reading the sequel.
blueishadow chapter 2 . 7/17/2008
That was sweet ]
princetongirl chapter 16 . 7/9/2008
nicolerools chapter 16 . 4/26/2008
i love this stry. Kinda reminded me of that movie She's all that.(or its called something close to that) anyway good job and can't wait to read the sequel
original valley girl chapter 10 . 4/13/2008
just one little correction in this Chapter it is acctually the "University of British Columbia Okanagan" in Kelowna or "Okanagan College" in Vernon, there is no longer "OUC"... just to updaye you
MewmewInuSailorHeart chapter 15 . 4/10/2008
I liked all of it great job :):):):):):):):):)
sballLuvr5 chapter 15 . 4/6/2008
great story! cant wait for the sequel!

fanficrulez chapter 15 . 4/5/2008
aw i loved the ending can't Wait for the sequel!
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