|Reviews for Unhappily Ever After|
| areosmithlover chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
OH! The irony of it all! Jonathan Crane a.k.a Squishykins having to kiss his "true love" (a.k.a Al)! I bet Techie and the Captain were having a good old crack-up at the Sleeping Beauty part. Amazing! Love the CATverse
| BlatantBookworm chapter 5 . 7/7/2012
Good for Jervis! He's a sweet little guy.
| BlatantBookworm chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
Love you turning Tink into a feminist!
| MissBliss8527 chapter 5 . 5/10/2012
As soon as Alice in Wonderland was mentioned in the first chapter, I was waiting for it to come into play. Giving it to Jervis is the best idea ever. :D
| TMNH chapter 5 . 11/12/2011
Dread dragon Roberts... That made my day. And the cow.
Damn it, I want that consol so bad now...
| highland girl 1592 chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
Aww,how altered the story
so Jonathan would have to kiss Al.:D
It's a good thing for Jonathan that the
Captain and Techie didn't know the original
ending to the Sleeping Jonathan,
for that .Jonathan isn't a swearing
or cursing man,but he would have said something
like,"No,*ing way,Am I going to do that!"
(more expletives deleted).I'm sure YOU know
how the Sleeping Beauty spell was broken!;)
To those who don't know,it involved some intimacy
(read sex)and twins being .
Jonathan,Sir Scare of Crow(!)That was fast thinking
on the Captain's part to come up with a good name
But I like Sir Squishy of the Rumbling Tummy,even better!
And Jervis will certainly love his new toy.
A wonderful story all around.:D
| Jen Rock chapter 5 . 4/19/2009
This was awesome. I loved all the little geeky references and the ending was just perfect. I hope Jervis enjoys his new toy.
| DrakkenWasHere chapter 5 . 4/17/2009
Aw, a perfect ending!
I'm so pathetic...The moment you mentioned "jazz music" I immediatly linked to the Warner cartoon. Just too cool for school, toots.
Overall, I think it was the perfect story. Though a part of me wonders how much Jervis is enjoying that gift...
| Protector of Canon2 chapter 5 . 4/16/2009
Ok, this was really, really fun. The imagry was great, I loved the random reference to the kraken at the base of Mount Doom (wasn't Mount Doom in a desert?) and I'll probably wake up giggling some time in the next week at the thought of a cow in shock.
| WhySoSerious1992 chapter 5 . 4/10/2009
Sleeping Beauty? That's priceless XD
| Teh Soul Cookie chapter 5 . 4/10/2009
Awesome! Lawl...Al was Sleeping Beauty and Squishy was her prince! And I would SO want to eb a pirate too! Arg, matey! *runs off to fund a pirate outfit*
| GodzPrincess chapter 5 . 4/10/2009
“The dragon is no more!”
“It has ceased to be!”
“It is an ex-dragon!”
WooHoo! HaHa! Yippe Ki Yay! You have no idea how hard I laughed at that.
I loved the ending too!
| invisible hand chapter 5 . 4/9/2009
god damn those other princesses. i hate that phraise with a passion. poor plumber(sp?)
| lil' augurey chapter 5 . 4/8/2009
Hi, long-time reader, first-time reviewer. ;
Call me crazy, but by the time Little Boy Blue showed up, I was beginning to think they were sent to 'The 10th Kingdom'. Bo Peep nearly confirmed my suspicions. (Boy, would that have been a long story!)
I absoluely love the ending: top notch! (What will Lexcorp think up next? Wait, don't answer that...)
For some reason, the shutting helmet piece reminded me of Sir Bedevere from 'Holy Grail'... Nah, couldn't be! ;)
| katdemon1895 chapter 5 . 4/8/2009
an awesome ending to a fun story, i was so close with my guess, can't believe i didn't think of sleeping beauty!
mario- your princess is in another castle- that was great
dread dragon roberts doesn't have anything to do with the pirate does he?
adore the name of sir scare of crow but sir squishy of the rumbly tummy (winnie the pooh?) was fantastic and i almost wish that the girls had indeed gone along with their first instinct, love that jonathan's voice gets all mumbled like that when his helm falls, that was a great touch
can't really think of anymore references, unless the first knight had to do with the nasty psuedo sugar restaurants use
nicely done, looking forward to more in the cat verse