Reviews for The Offer
Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 8 . 9/27/2008
It's simple and sweet. (: Thanks for that. (:
pip-pipthepirate chapter 8 . 5/26/2008
update soon
waterlily85 chapter 2 . 5/22/2008
I really like it so far, but some of it seemed a bit repeatative.
Owl Emporium chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
I loved this! It was SO sweet! Great, great job! :)

Historianic chapter 8 . 5/16/2008
I just read this fic so have had the pleasure of reading the first 8 chapters in one go! You're doing a great job and I'm really enjoying your story. I'm really glad you got Betty and Daniel together in this chapter, as opposed to putting them through an angst-o-rama for a chapter or two. My heart went out to Daniel at the end of chapter 7; I loved the big romantic gesture of going after Betty at the airport to stop her and the support of the relationship from Claire Meade in chapter 6. Loved Daniel's revelation in chapter 6, I could totally imagine it in my mind's eye. And while I hate to see our favourite couple apart, I appreciate the twist you put on things with your chapter 7 ending. I'm just thrilled to bits you fixed it in chapter 8 which I was able to read straight after! So now I'm curious to see where you take this next? What is happily ever after going to be like for Daniel and Betty? There's still a lot you can develop here so update asap please! Kepp up the good work!
SmilinStar chapter 8 . 5/13/2008
Aw that was sweet. I liked how Betty just turned up, sat down and said nothing, waiting for Daniel to look up. Lovely.

SmilinStar x
Yin7 chapter 8 . 5/12/2008
Love is in the air.
Lady Nuit chapter 8 . 5/12/2008

Love this chapter that I forgot how evil Betty was when she stomped on his heart! (Okay overdramatic but hey.)

Happy chapter yay!

AndromedaAiken chapter 8 . 5/12/2008
You have to update right now!
abovetherim chapter 8 . 5/12/2008
awesome chapter!
didi6 chapter 8 . 5/12/2008
Great chapter, more soon!

I love your storie!
englishstudent01 chapter 8 . 5/12/2008
Aww what a sweet ending love it
JackSam chapter 8 . 5/11/2008
Love it. Add more soon.
englishstudent01 chapter 7 . 5/11/2008
Wow this good please update soon
Lady Nuit chapter 7 . 5/5/2008

...OKAy done crying WTF!

UPdate and mae the story happy again *pouts*

o.o '.'PLEASE!
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