|Reviews for Chocolate|
| ho'okahialohaX018 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
delicious. thank you.
| Cerisabeth chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
I loved this story too, hehe.I like your writing style, and I loved the theme for this story. Good job! :D
| fhfhfhhhrh chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
Haha, yes! This was so funny XD Good work!
| Hawkeye-Fan-101 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I liked it alot. Keep up your writing.
| Louanna chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
I really enjoyed that. It was cute (: thanks x
| silver sniper of night chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
haha so awesome, i love it!
| PermanentNerd chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
Oh man that was hilarious. Great story me loved it!
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
That was really fun! And now I feel like having chocolate pudding... O_O;
| random-fruitcake04 chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
a well-written fanfic if i may say so myself.
roy so perverted. like kakashi. hahahahah men...seriously. anywho, nice story. you should make a sequel to it.
| Red's 21st chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Very funny and nicely written too!
| Tears of a Broken Sniper chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Riza was so seducive, that it was funny. It was cute.
| You-Can't-Fall-Up-From-Love chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
| Silindro chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Haha that was great. First Hagane fic I've read in a while and thoroughly enjoyed myself.
| Anne Packrat chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Cute! I like your Havoc and the backdrop of an Open House.
| Exhile87 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
XD XD XD XD Yes, that's how my face was at the end of this chapter. Two words; GREAT WORK. XD Love how Roy is as 'Roy' as possible! _