|Reviews for Saving Angels|
| Cirruz The Night Elf chapter 2 . 11/25/2011
This is a REALLY amazing story, and I hope you update soon!
| ImmortalObsession chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
Great story! Please continue! :)
| HeyThereTwyla chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
Pretty good so far. but there is a mistake here when it says:
“Bella, I have to. Stay here, with your mom, okay? I’ll visit you soon.” He kissed her on the cheek before getting into his car.
after that it says:
“Bella, I have to. I promise that I will visit.” He walked out the door quickly and got into his car.
and there's too many "I"s, like here:
I walked on the playground, not really wanting to play today. My mommy had left me here, all alone. I heard someone crying behind the tree in the grass. I walked around to see an angel crying. I felt sad; my mommy had told me that angels only cry when something bad happened. I sat down next to her in the grass.
you might want to give a little more thought, like what he's thinking in there. do you see what i mean when you read it over?
just some small mistakes there, no biggie. update soon
| luv-edward cullen-forever chapter 2 . 11/5/2008
awsome story and plz continue plz
| Sapphire Mizu chapter 2 . 8/9/2008
Cool, update soon.
| Sapphire Mizu chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
Very good. I want to see where this is going. D -excited- Now, I shall read the second chapter. D
| coquelicotte chapter 2 . 6/26/2008
Very good so far! update soon!
| Okami Luna chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
It's good. Please continue.
| ireadway2much chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
es very very good! can't wait to read the rest. please update soon!
| nerdosaurus93 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Ooh I like it. Is this all human or will there be vampires in it?