Reviews for Vertigo
Esquizoide chapter 24 . 11/22/2012
Overral, good fic.
JaidenAye chapter 24 . 11/14/2012
I love this story. The depth and evolution of the characters was a breath of fresh air.
PS chapter 14 . 10/28/2012
Wooh! Best part yet! I can't wait to read the next chappie.
ZaeraDourden chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
This was a very enjoyable story. I'm so glad it had a happy ending! :D
btalover chapter 24 . 9/26/2012
I...I just cant express how amazing this story was...I think I love deisaku more than ever before now! Thank you for writing this story!
Miss Ashlynn chapter 24 . 9/24/2012
This was a very enjoyable story from beginning to end:)
Elflady88 chapter 24 . 9/20/2012
I have only one word really; Breathtaking! I was literary swept away by the story and how you portrayed the characters and gave them, especially the Akatsuki a depth that they didn't get in the manga or anime before they were killed off. I couldn't stop reading and every time I stopped to take a break I just wanted to read a tiny bit more to see what happened:) I like how you kept some canon but then broke off and pawed your own plotline, one that was very good in its own and became even better as I'm a sucker for happy endings'.

I only saw some spelling mistakes although the writing was very good and captivating and while some charcters sometimes seemed very friendly it wasn't so weird, after all who knew how they really where in the series as none of the Akatsuki got very much screentime except for the fighting. Seeing as Deidara and Sakura has the centre off attention here I really like how you wrote and evolved them both. Now that I've rambled on for a while I'll leave off with another nod to you; Great story!
Goldlock chapter 23 . 9/14/2012
Thanks to you I ship Deidara and Sakura soooo hard! I really loved your story, I'm sad it's over :s

Goldilocks
BladeAuror chapter 24 . 9/8/2012
So cute, loved it.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/2/2012
this has me captivated. i just love it. i feel like masashi kishimoto would be proud of this story. you are simply amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
This one chapter was amazing! I wonder how the other chapters will outdo this one.
ichthyophobic chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
This story kept me up till 4 am in the morning because I couldn't put it down.
It was well thought out, the characters well developed, and I loved it. I simply adored this story to pieces.
viagra chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
i love how pakkuns in the story 3
Chibiabyss chapter 24 . 8/11/2012
they should have kids
xXFallenxBeautyxX chapter 24 . 7/27/2012
Two words. Simply. Amazing.
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