Reviews for Vertigo
Jen Konoha chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
WOT! Love it! It's great, but of course you always do great...

I loved that kiss in the first chapter. It felt artistic, well, in a Deidara's art kind of way lol.
Pretty. Much. Odd chapter 2 . 4/3/2008
ah, this chapter is awesome.

DeiSaku again, YAYS! i'm so happy! :D

omg, make Deidara come see her again . . .pwease? xD

i beg thee, UPDATE!
Nairo Xana and Jemmi chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
Xana: Ooh, this is interesting. :D I'm so happeh! Sasuke died -has party-...


well, i look forward to the next chapter.

I particularly enjoyed the beginning of this chapter, the first sentance had me absolutely cracking up.

The five year time skip was interesting, but admittably nessicary. Knowing you, we won't have to wait much longer for Deidara to show up, so I look foward to that too. XD
Nairo Xana and Jemmi chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Xana: :D This definately has the potential to be very interesting. It's by you, so of course it's going to be absolutely amazing, but I love how it takes place after he blows himself up. XD. Maybe you'll explain how he didn't die? Or not. Doesn't matter either way.

Anyway, only thing is that it might have been a BIT out of character for sakura to keep healing him after she realized who he was, but you also explained that well, so it's okay. :)

I look forward to reading this one.
Art is a bang4979 chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
Sweet I loves it! I love how boyish Deidara was in the first chapter I hope you keep that adoribleness in the coming chapters. I loved Silver Lining Deidara but I hope this one acts more like a kid it will be interesting to see what you come up with anyway
keiichisei chapter 2 . 4/2/2008
...though I am devastated by your version of Sasuke's story, I will keep reading because I like how you wrote Deidara in the first chapter. The ink replaced by soy sauce was great! Good luck writing this week and everything~
Sekowari chapter 2 . 4/1/2008
This is great! Can't wait to see what happens next! xD
Solosan chapter 2 . 4/1/2008

Oh and the plot thickens! I do love how you portray the citizens of Naruto~ And Naruto and Sai's closeness just makes me feel warm and bubbly inside, it's such an AWESOME friendship~~

Wow... 5 years... Time skip of note~

Naruto finally clicking about Hinata made me smile, and Team Kakashi's childish dynamics made me grin too~ I do wonder how this will turn out! It's shaping up to be real interesting, looking forward to it~~
Sofia chapter 2 . 4/1/2008
Yay! You're writing another deisaku, I
jesseternal chapter 2 . 4/1/2008
coolness cant wait for the next chapter plz update soon
Slice of American Cheese chapter 2 . 3/31/2008
does it have to do with dei-kun?
Kamden chapter 2 . 3/31/2008
Sorry for the delay in reading your fanfiction; I was really busy with schoolwork this past two weeks. .

I'd have to say that this is one great beginning. I can't wait to see what happens when Sakura and Deidara meet up again. XD It's quite obvious that Sakura remembers their previous meeting, but I do wonder why Deidara hadn't tried to meet Sakura during those 3-4 years.

The only thing I didn't like was the NaruHina/SasuSaku, but I'll live. Since Naruto is alive for this one, I was really hoping for a bit of DeiSakuNaru (which is my ultimate OT3 XD). I can just skip the NH/SS parts and go straight to the DeiSaku goodness.
Zekya chapter 2 . 3/31/2008
Sasuke's dead, huh? ...good. Ahem, anyway, great chapter. I love the deal with the cheese. Can't wait for more awesomeness. I hope you do fanart for this one as well.

dfhfgjghkgyhk chapter 2 . 3/31/2008
you killed sasuke straight off

that just makes the fic that much better

yup no sasuke to mess stuff up
raspberry soap chapter 2 . 3/31/2008
I think this is shaping up to be your best fic yet. This chapter really got to me. Being a huge fan of Sasuke, both as a hottie(though I don't like to go for the obvious)and as a great character, this chapter was hard to read. I cried.

Still, it was excellent, as usual. Also, I just now realized that this is the first time I'll be able to follow one of your fics from the very beginning. I'm pretty pumped about it. I feel more like I'm in on something.

Looking forward to the next installment!
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