Reviews for His Tender Blows
Sakurakaguya chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
you write so good! i wish there was more chapters! I really like ur story! great job!
sam5antha chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Great story! Love it!
Possessed-Gummy-Bear-Inferno chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
wow, this was extremely interesting!
Muria chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Very effective descriptions. The rats motif adds so much to what the Sound Four are, and what they live like...

I feel sorry for Tayuya and the boys...

Good one-shot!
graypheonix chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Hm, interesting. Continue to write, it's a most, interesting viewpoint. Ja ne.
ILikeAppleCider chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
wow that was violent lol, but I still liked it. great work!
RakeeshJ4 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Ouch! What a really gritty but enjoyable (couldn't look away, actually) one-shot of the Sound Four and Kimimaro.

It actually hadn't occurred to me before, but whereas Haku apparently had a master willing to indulge his virtue and desire not to harm, I very much doubt Kimimaro had a master with a similar tolerance.

I doubt Orochimaru would have permitted Kimimaro to go about like a pacifist. In my imagination, you never get by working for Orochimaru unless you're serving a purpose, and for the Snake Sannin, the only purposes that matter are achieved by hurting people.

I like this look at Tayuya. You add some serious dimension to her. Thanks for sharing!
humsha chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
looks nice peas update