Reviews for Captive
kirara the great chapter 6 . 7/14/2014
I want a sequel covering sam's experience with screamer preferably all the autobots experiences but thats a bit much to ask for
transformedstarwarsgal chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
Hey, I just read all 6 chapters of this story and I truly LOVE it. I hope you update soon
MissCHSparkles chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
not sure what do think, it just seems so... weird that every single Autobot is happy to be made a pet of and has somehow been paired with the right Decepticons? Aren't any really unhappy or tried to fight.

Also the bit with Sam is quite uncomfortable, because we know he was horribly tortured into becoming a good little slave. And now he suddenly seems fine with it, indicating he hasn't bended but has utterly and completely been broken.
MissCHSparkles chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
good story although I'm not so keen on the fact Optimus just gives in, just like that. I prefer him strong as opposed to loving being a weak, slavish pet that has no will of it's own. I do hope Optimus grows more spine.
Crazygrrl XD chapter 6 . 4/21/2012
Heh heh... Smexy and cute!~
Lady Wratt chapter 6 . 3/12/2012
genial
Optimus' girl chapter 6 . 2/8/2012
It has been almost three years since your last update! I would just LOVE to read a new chapter any day now! When do you plan on updating your AWESOME story? I would also like to read more of Optimus and Megatron getting it on in your next chapter!

Megatron sure has gone soft being with Optimus. I do mean soft as a new pillow. I would just LOVE to read more about Optimus and Megatron's relationship, PLEASE! It has been so LONG since your last updated a new chapter! Please update as soon as you can, PLEASE!
animepunk314 chapter 6 . 12/16/2011
Oh u should SOOOOO... UPDATE THIS!
electro moonlight chapter 6 . 12/13/2011
more? this is really good
electro moonlight chapter 2 . 12/12/2011
crap sorry reviewed the wrong story my comment in chapter one was meant for kitty kitty fanfic my bad, evil tabs are evil on my pc
electro moonlight chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
please please tell me you will continue this I gotta know what will happen next. This pairing is so unusual and yet fits so well, and the story so far has been very good.
Patcher chapter 6 . 3/29/2011
This was really interesting! I enjoyed reading it, so I hope you do continue writing!
Optimus'girl chapter 5 . 11/20/2010
Megatron had better be careful to not and get Optimus pregnant with his sparkling from all the spark-merging! Megatron would make a great father if he had get Optimus pregnant with one or two sparklings! *giggles at the thought of Optimus being pregnant with Megatron's sparkling(s)* I am so happy that Optimus and Megatron are no longer sick with that nasty virus!
AkiraNatsume chapter 5 . 1/18/2010
Any chapters on Sam what s it face?
Silvergear chapter 6 . 12/26/2009
i love this so much, please update soon!

hehe. they were screwing each other in the shower..
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