Reviews for When the World Ends
Thescarredman chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Good first chapter. Lots of tie-ins to dialogue and reminiscences in the series. You have a terse writing style well suited to the tense action.
fairedust chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
I liked it. I really enjoy seeing from Dereks point of view.
CommanderKilljoy chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
That was really good. Loved how you showed how scared Kyle was and how Derek was being a big brother.

PS- You know who this is.
dakota423 chapter 1 . 4/7/2008
wow. very good.
Livy1213 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I like it. When Derek was recalling J-Day in the finale I was wondering what happened to his parents but he doesn't say. In Vick's Chip he also said he took Kyle to the underground tunnels under LA after the bombs fell, so I assume their parents either died on J-Day or didn't last long because it sounded very much like they were on their own. Funny how they've never been mentioned on the show.
todrownandburn chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Wow i thought it was really good.

It's great how you've used Kyle and Derek's parents no one ever mentions them.

Keep writing it was amazing
Dre4mwe4ver chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Great! I love how you incoorperated the "you don't" line in there. I'm impressed with the clairity of your language. Awesome story!