Reviews for Artificial Strawberries
Bonta Mclonty chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
Wow.
Lawli chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Excellent writing, great idea, wonderful story in all. Well done, it was brilliant and I enjoyed it a lot!
TheBoredCat chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
LOVE IT
gamtavanderisolotp chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
o-o* i love it QwQ
necro-romancer chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Hm... I can't Believe you put L as the uke. Unimaginable. Literally.
I can't realistically see L actually reacting at all like he did in this story.
L as the uke, is highly unrealistic. His reactions, were highly unrealistic.
Light was more believable, if not too horny.
I found your sex noises,,, ill-described.
Other than that, one of the finest I've read so far.
Worth reading.
Rare to come across one with L as the uke.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
O_O how did you get so good. XD i laughr so hard at the teasing!
Sakura chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Yo. This is awesome. And so deliciously hot and sexy. :3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
I know my english is not that good but every night? Light would do like ヘンタイthings with L? OMG!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Daaaaaamn :o
Chellyisback chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
OMG *nosebleed* awesome writen skills!
Verses chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
*wolf whistle* dayyyyum! :D
Callmepapercandycornyay chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
You're skilled at writing. Ever thought of doing an mpreg for this couple? (Just a thought...)

I'm faving this.
AnimeKeepsMeSane chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
O.O *jaw drop* WOW!
Cameo Vincenti chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
It made me laugh XD

Loved it!
Syndrigast chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
D'awwww... I really loved it. I really loved how the 'artificial strawberries' thingy always got brought to the story :P Overall, great job. Although there's some typing errors in there. But, duh, a bit mud stain won't crap up the work... :D

Keep up the awesome job! I love your writing.

-Jaune.
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