You're a gifted writer. You're writing really sucked me in. A very well thought out plot. I really hope you finish this story someday...hopefully sooner rather than later.

echa a narcisa de la casa, ella se está pasando de conchuda, tras de que vive de gratis en la casa de Lucius va y se cree con derecho de criticar su relacion diciendo que se preocupa por el? en serio? cinica

this is story is really amazing. i do not often find stories like yours. i was entranced in your writing skills and the skill to gift the characters realistic features. you keep the story alive and adventoures in every new chapter. i saddens me that you quit writting this story. even through the last chapter was 3 years ago i am sure you have so much new input to give the story. please give your readers a chance to get to know the end of this story. if you have a writing blockade dont hold on to old believes how the story should end. give the story a chance to ends itself. maybe read it again so you can see the amazing work you created.

como va a ser un pairing rating M si él tiene sida? la va a contagiar? encontraran una cura? y yo preocupando por que le pondrian cuernos a narcisa...ahora me pregunto se acostaran? por que honestamente que ya vaya dejando a ron...

I really hope you update this story soon. Great story

Oh my goodness - I don’t have enough ways to LOVE this!

Goodness, this story is so good. Is this the end?

I have to say I’ve just binged 20 chapters and this story is amazing! So inventive and absorbing!

I post this every year when I reread this but gosh I wish there'd be an update. I love this story so much!

so i cheated and used google translate for the italian. nice.
"hair of gold, eyes like the sky, and a big package. you will make many beautiful children."

Woah. I rarely write reviews anymore but this story has been so good. A page turner from the very first. I stayed up most of the night reading it. I think you’ve explored the natures of redemption, forgiveness, and love quite well. And introducing HIV is not something I’ve ever seen another fanfiction author do. It can be really hard to avoid cliches in fanfic, but you’ve done an excellent job of keeping your story fresh and interesting without deviating from the characters’ behaviors too much. You’ve fleshed our even the minor characters in your story and your original characters as well. I can hardly wait to see the story conclude. It seems like you’re fairly close to the end.

Shout out to my home country- South Africa! xx
Loving this story!

Oh wow! This drew me in so quickly, I love what you’ve done with the storyline! The whole plot revolving around the timeturner has been spectacular, I could hardly breathe while reading to see what Lucius would do. And then what he asks her as soon as he gets back! Ahhhhh! This is wonderful, you’re a phenomenal writer. Thank you so much for sharing this work!

I love this story! So very sad to see that you haven’t updated in a while, i really hope you find the time and the will to finish it some day because it’s an amazing story. You’d make many readers so very happy!

I absolutely love the idea. I wish there were more Lucius stories out there but I’m struggling a lot to read this fic. There’s descritive and there’s unnecessarily lengthy.

Hermione’s an amazing character for your writing style but the perspective needs to shift now and again otherwise it feels like a strangle hold. Anyway, good luck with your writing, you have a talent for description, it just needs to be honed. No reason to give up now