Reviews for Time's Heart
brikaspoms chapter 26 . 11/18/2013
Very good story
dragoncreators chapter 26 . 9/9/2013
great story, mighty confusing though.
dragoncreators chapter 4 . 9/9/2013
Theta smiled and arched an eyebrow. "Devoleb evaheb."

as soon as i read that i realized what it was, weird right?
Behave Beloved.
Serendipity989 chapter 26 . 8/27/2013
It was difficult to keep track of the story. Kinda confusing in most parts, I had to read it twice to fully understand. But it's a great story, good job :)
Nerdygurl4 chapter 26 . 1/20/2013
There are some really large gaps in this story, I still like it, but it would be nice to read the whole thing.
thena-ditey chapter 26 . 11/4/2012
YAAAAAY! Loooooooovvvvveeeee...
thena-ditey chapter 11 . 11/4/2012
I *love* how this is coming together.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
"Ereh'w eht kerf era ew won?"
Where the fcuk are we now?
Friggin lol. Dude, I love you. :L
TheAngelofIego chapter 26 . 5/14/2012
I loved this! is there more?
timano chapter 26 . 11/20/2011
I enjoyed reading this story! 10 out of 10 stars. (I look forward to reading the sequel!)
ShadoweGoddess chapter 26 . 5/30/2011
PriderockT chapter 10 . 11/14/2010
I'm in the process of reading your story. I love the fact that you've included snippets of the Gallafrien language in it. Is there any chance of including a glossary of it at the end?
Twilight Journey chapter 10 . 5/29/2010
Okay, seriously, what the heak is the native language? what are they saying?
Lostinthoughtantime chapter 25 . 5/29/2010
Oooh... you have to write more... please!

I need a happy ending :-)

Love all the ideas in this story... very complex but you pulled it off...


FlyFly chapter 2 . 12/30/2009
I can read his language, Nheheheh

and im only on the first chapter!



kay still reading...

hold on.

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