|Reviews for Oversight|
| cavetrollgrl chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Great ending. First we have a worried Dean who is determined to older brother Sam into Health. The doctor made a nice OC tough enough to take a stand an preventing a Winchester breakout then laughing at their banter. Then Sam trying to break out and getting out to older brother hovering. Bobby tring to explain thing to dean was a nice touch. He can try. Please try a sequal I bet Sam will have problems resting too.
| friendly chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
awesome story and would love to see a sequel..
| PaulaXan chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
I'm chanting: "Sequel...Sequel...Sequel...Sequel" :p
Great H/C with hurt Sam. Loved it! All of it!
| callitintheair chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Awesome story, that was a great ending.
I loved the last chapter, I hope you do getting around to writing a sequel.
| ziggy.uk chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Awesome ending, but definitely room for a sequel there girl! You had that final chapter so believable - the doctor not letting Sam leave the hospital until he thought he was ready, and the slow journey to Bobby's because of the frequent stops needed for his injuries. Totally right that Dean would have been so concerned about Sam that he didn't get the impala fixed, but as he could also do that at Bobby's it made sense!
Great that Sam is slowly healing but also true what you said in your AN - there is no way Sam could go more than a few weeks sticking to the doctor's orders, despite Dean and Bobby keeping a strict eye on him!
Brilliant story, so glad to see you back writing, had really missed you during your absence. Will look forward to your next work.
| Deanaholic1 chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
omg,i love it, and yes, i would love a sequel
| Scullspeare chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Ah, that was good.
And you're right - it works wonderfully as is, but when a sequel begs to be told, I say tell it. There's no way in heck a Winchester can sit still for long. And something tells me Dean's 'I wouldn't be a whiny bitch' protests are going to come back to haunt him. Hint Hint.
Great brotherly moments - not too gooey, just very in character.
Loved it, and thanks!
| MDarKspIrIt chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
That was awesome... I hope real hard for a sequel... That ending just makes me want more...
| astalder27 chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
I dont think Sam could either LOL! Please write a sequel, I dont think Sammy's spleen will last much longer LOL!
| FraidyCat chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
154 reviews in 3 chapters is one of the most amazing things I have seen here on ff. With a score of Reviews 154, Fake Beta 1, I'm sure you must realize who is right.
Another nice whumplet.
| sammygirl1963 chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Awesome ending to this story and you most definitely need to write a sequel, we all know that Sammy i going to push himself even after the doc told him not too.
Wow, poor Dean, I can only imagine the pain he went thru waiting for Sammy to get out of surgery and blaming himself for the condition that Sammy was in!
| maxandkiz chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Awesome chapter! Loved Dean and the doc ganging up on Sam. Sounds like its going to be a long recovery. Glad they'll be at Bobby's while he rests. Wonder how long Sam can make it before he does something he's not supposed it. Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! :)
| gothraven89 chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
He's feeling mighty guilty but, i guess he kinds does desereve to feel that way.
YAY the Sam's okay.
This was one of your best stories yet!
Keep on writing cause you are amazing!
| Colby's girl chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Woohoo a sequel!
Loved the story. I somehow missed chapter two when it was posted so I'm sorry I didn't review. Loved what you've done and I can't wait for the next story. Thanks
| RedDragen chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
That was a cute short story.