Reviews for Cloud Age Symphony
Really chapter 15 . 5/4/2013
music: Hitoshizuku P off vocal

*I use Macron when romanizing.

kyozō no rakuen no hate no
fukai fukai daichi no soko de
tada hitori inori no uta o
utai tsuzuru sadame

yukiba o nakushita kako kara
meguri tsuzukeru koe o tsunagi
kuri kaesu rekishi no fuchi de
sadame ni mi o sasagu

nani mo shirazu tada uta dake
tsumuide ikite kita
hare no uta o ame no uta o
yasashī requiem o
rakuen eto tsuzuku michi no saki ni sashi nobe rareta
atatakai te sae todokazu ni

towa ni utai tsuzuke nasai...

horobu sekai no yugami no soko de
inori no uta o kanaderu sadame
wasu rareshi kako ni nemuru yasashī koe ni
zetsubō sae mo hohoemi ni kae
namida no soko ni shizunde iku

zetsubō no rakuen no hate ni
nakushita koe o sagashi motome
michi naki michi o tada tōku
samayoi yuku sadame

toza sareta rekishi no kage ni
ubawa reshi hi o omoi nagara
kokoro no oku hibiku koe wa kutsū ni mi modaeru
towa ni tsuzuku rakuen eto negai wa todokazu ni
tada yugande koe to tomo ni
kie satte meguru dake
ima kono te de tashikame tai kimi no nukumori no oto
kizu tsuku koto sae itowazu ni

watashi wa tatakau
(ore wa tatakau)

araburu koe no tamashī o ubai
kono yo no hate made tsuzutte nemure
kono hikari o tokasi temo todokanu nara
itsuwari no rakuen o kono te de
owaraseru dake

utatte...

watashi wa inoru mamoru tame ni
egao ga kobore hikari sasu sekai no tame ni
(ore wa tatakau kowasu tame ni
kimi wa naiteta tada hitori de)

asu eto tsunagu hikari no kibō nouta
inochi o atae ibuki koe o
atarashī kaze ni nose inochi tsukiru made...
(kako o hōmuru kage no zetsubō no uta
inochi o ubai owari no koe
yama nai ame ni nagashi inochi tsukiru made...)

mata meguru

subete no koe wa hikari to deai kage eto tsunagu
kuri kaesu rekishi to narite
meguru sekai no kodō no oto wa
owari o tsugeru kane to nari hibiku
subete no inochi wa tae atarashī me ga
ibuku saki no hikari to kage no rakuen ni
negai o...

-
光と影の楽園
-

虚像の楽園の果ての
深い 深い大地の底で
ただ独り 祈りの歌を
謡い綴る運命―

行き場を無くした過去から
巡り続ける声を繋ぎ
繰り返す 歴史の淵で
運命に身を捧ぐ

何も知らず ただ歌だけ
紡いで 生きてきた
晴れの歌を 雨の歌を
優しいレクイエムを
楽園へと 続く道の先に 差し伸べられた
暖かい手さえ 届かずに

トワニウタイツヅケナサイ…

滅ぶ世界の 歪みの底で
祈りの歌を 奏でる ―宿命―
忘られし 過去に眠る 優しい声に
絶望さえも 微笑みに変え
涙の底に 沈んでいく

[レン]
絶望の楽園の果てに
無くした声を探し求め
道なき道をただ遠く
彷徨い往く運命―

閉ざされた歴史の影に
奪われし日を想いながら
心の奥 響く声は 苦痛に身悶える
永久に続く楽園へと 願いは届かずに
ただ歪んで 声とともに
消え去って 巡るだけ
今此の手で 確かめたい 君の温もりの音
傷つくことさえ 厭わずに

私は戦う(俺は戦う)

荒ぶる声の 魂を奪い
この世の果てまで 綴って眠れ
此の光を 溶かしても
届かぬなら
偽りの楽園を此の手で
終わらせるだけ

歌って…

私は 祈る 守るために
笑顔がこぼれ 光射す世界のために
(俺は 戦う 壊すために
君は泣いていた ただ独りで)

明日へと繋ぐ 光の希望の歌
命を与え 息吹く声を
新しい風にのせ 命尽きるまで…
(過去を葬る 影の絶望の歌
命を奪い
終わりの声 止まない雨に流し 命尽きるまで…)

マタメグル

[リン]
全ての声は 光と出会い 影へと繋ぐ
繰り返す歴史となりて
[レン]
巡る世界の 鼓動の音は
終わりを告げる 鐘となり 響く
全ての命は絶え 新しい芽が
[二人]
息吹く先の 光と影の楽園に
願いを…

[non singable translation]

[Rin]
At the end of the artificial paradise
Deep, deep in the bottom of the earth
I am fated to sing prayers
All alone

From the past that had nowhere to go
I weave voices going round and round
At the edge of the repeating history
I dedicate myself to the fate

Not knowing anything, I've been continuously singing
For the whole of my life
A song for the sun, a song for rain
A gentle requiem
At the end of the road to the paradise
Warm hands were offered
But couldn't reach me

[Miku]
Sing forever...

[Rin]
At the distorted bottom of the dying world
I am fated to sing prayers
With the gentle voices sleeping in the forgotten past
As I change my despair to a smile
I sink to the bottom of tears

[Len]
At the end of the desperate paradise
I seek the lost voice
I am fated to wander
From street to street, further and further away

In the shadow of the closed history
I long for the stolen days
The voice that echoes in the depth of my heart is agonized by suffering
My wish doesn't reach to the everlasting paradise
It is distorted with voices and keep vanishing away

I wanna make sure the sound of your warmth with my hands,
Not hesitating to get hurt

[Rin][Len]
I will fight...

I'll take the life of the roaring voice
Let it write and sleep to the end of the world
If I can't reach you after dissolving light,
Then I'll just finish off this artificial paradise
With my own hands

Please sing...

I pray to protect for the bright world
Where everyone can smile
(I fight to to put an end
I saw you crying alone)

A song of hope of light to tomorrow
Giving my life to it, I sing vigorously
Let my voice float with wind till I die...
(A song of despair of shadow to bury the past
Your existance stolen from me, your voice ceases
A sink for the never-ending rain till I die...)

[Rin]
All voices encounter light and lead to shadow
As the repeating history...

[Len]
The thumping sound of the infinite world resounds
To declare the end
All life ends and grows back

[Rin][Len]
Again in paradise of light and shadow
Let my wish reach there...
Really chapter 15 . 5/4/2013
Kyozou no rakuen no hate no
fukai fukai daichi no soko de
tada hitori inori no uta o
utai tsuzuru sadame

yukiba o nakushita kako kara
meguri tsuzukeru koe o tsunagi
kuri kaesu rekishi no fuchi de
sadame ni mi o sasagu

nani mo shirazu tada uta dake
tsumuide ikite kita
hare no uta o ame no uta o
yasashii requiem o
rakuen eto tsuzuku michi no saki ni
sashi nobe rareta
atatakai te sae todokazu ni

towa ni utai tsuzuke nasai...

horobu sekai no yugami no soko de
inori no uta o kanaderu sadame
wasu rareshi kako ni nemuru yasashii koe ni
zetsubou sae mo hohoemi ni kae
namida no soko ni shizunde iku

zetsubou no rakuen no hate ni
nakushita koe o sagashi motome
michi naki michi o tada tooku
samayoi yuku sadame

toza sareta rekishi no kage ni
ubawa reshi hi o omoi nagara
kokoro no oku hibiku koe wa kutsuu ni mi modaeru
towa ni tsuzuku rakuen eto negai wa todokazu ni
tada yugande koe to tomo ni
kie satte meguru dake
ima kono te de tashikametai
kimi no nukumori no oto
kizu tsuku koto sae itowazu ni

watashi wa utau...
(ore wa tatakau...)

araburu koe no tamashii o ubai
kono yo no hate made tsuzutte nemure
kono hikari o tokashi temo todokanu nara
itsuwari no rakuen o kono te de
owaraseru dake

/utatte.../

watashi wa inoru mamoru tame ni
egao ga kobore hikari sasu sekai no tame ni
(ore wa tatakau kowasu tame ni
kimi wa naiteta tada hitori de)

asu eto tsunagu hikari no kibou no uta
inochi o atae ibuki koe o
atarashii kaze ni nose inochi tsukiru made...
(kako o houmuru kage no zetsubou no uta
inochi o ubai owari no koe
yama nai ame ni nagashi inochi tsukiru made...)

subete no koe wa hikari to deai kage eto tsunagu
kuri kaesu rekishi to narite
meguru sekai no kodou no oto wa
owari o tsugeru kane to nari hibiku
subete no inochi wa tae atarashii me ga
ibuku saki no hikari to kage no rakuen ni
negai o...
Anon chapter 9 . 5/3/2013
There are no words to describe how wonderful your story is. Your prose, the story itself, the characterization. You have sentences that bring me to tears; paragraphs that I read over and over again just to relish in their beauty; and words dropped so meticulously that it is like they are carved in stone.

Everything about this story moves me.

So it brings me to literal tears that when I got around to re-reading this story I found that you had changed it. I understand that it is now considered 'canon' and I appreciate the effort you did to change it until it was so. Furthermore, the chapters work seamlessly into the original story with that same fluidity.

But it isn't the same. It seems petty to complain about something so miniscule when you have given us readers such a wonderful story but it was the original that I fell in love with. Reading this new story only feels like a deviation from the original, the pure 'true' version. And the idea that the original story was deleted, thrown into the abyss to never be read again makes me ill.

It is probably too much to ask, but if the original story does exist, I would eternally be in your debt if you posted it on the website as an 'alternate'. Both versions are gorgeous in their own right and deserved to be seen.

Thank you for creating this story and sharing it with us readers.
Riter29 chapter 15 . 4/24/2013
-_- I so dont like you right now. Is WER a sequel or companion fic?Is it a continuing of this horrifficly-terrific ending of ch.15?! OMG! I so don't like you...but I love ya all the same. I loved this story! So well written and genuine, characterization was spot on and the plot made sense, absolute sense. Due to your great writing, you could have characterized Minato as a badass perv who picked his nose, and I probably would have come to accept and believe it! SMH. I really hope I can see a nice ending to this, Naruto deserves as much. Thanks for the lovely read! _
tsukuyomi67 chapter 15 . 4/12/2013
I wanna cry so much you know. This... GAH! This story was so awesome and amazing that it makes me feel sad. And yet, I felt that it is so much like Naruto to do that. This time-travel story wasn't about changing the past even if Naruto would've liked to do it so much. This was about meeting his father and understanding the past. I really love how much you made this story to be so realistic. The emotions and the chapters were so realistic that it made me wistful in thinking that maybe...just maybe this would have been what I would like to happen as a movie in canon if Musashi Kishimoto would want to write it. Thank you so much for the fanfic and keep up the good work!
ougley chapter 15 . 3/20/2013
thanks
Guest chapter 3 . 3/15/2013
I like it, so I'll come back and write some reviews for each chapter! :)
Insanely-Yours96 chapter 15 . 3/3/2013
All I can really think at this point is "How dare you end it right there." It is both the perfect and most terrible part to end it... because, really, EVERYONE wants to hear that sappy convo that's about to happen. GAAAAAH. Why're you so awesome that I can't even blame you?
567gyj chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Eh what ? Good story . Is the end?
margaret chapter 3 . 2/10/2013
This story so far is very intriguing. There is just enough complexity and mystery to keep a reader on edge, with an excellently measured mixture of humor and sentiment.
Dumti chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
I never noticed it before but when Minato says he met Naruto before but couldn't remember where, were you talking about the movie, 'The Lost Tower'? Minato sealed up everyone's memories so the time wouldn't be messed up or anything.

Anyway, I absolutely loved and is my... fifth or sixth time re-reading it again!
flaming rose chapter 15 . 2/8/2013
"You know. I doubt I can understand you, I'm sixty minutes old, after all." Oh my god, I just loved this part! Eppppppp! And, I think I read something about a squel in the summary? Anyway, I can't wait to start reading! So thank you, and I'll be sure to check! Anyway, bye!
flaming rose chapter 14 . 2/8/2013
Hmmmm…
flaming rose chapter 11 . 2/8/2013
Yay!
flaming rose chapter 10 . 2/8/2013
Hmmm…
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