|Reviews for Human Contact|
| annana chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
I just found this through a rec and loved it - if only the characters would interact like this (or at all) on the show! The tone you strike is perfect - it's a poignant moment w/out being overly sentimental, Derek's POV rings true, and Cameron's presence adds an extra layer to the interactions. Excellent writing as well, and I loved the last line.
| fairedust chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
I really enjoyed this story. I like to see Derek be "Uncle Derek". I think they should put more of it in the show. Show his inner conflict with hating Conner but loving his nephew John. Who else would be able to understand.
| autumn0587 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
I think I'm reading too many Derek fanfics. I actually shuddered when Cam said the last line.
| Sensue chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
I'm a sucker for those family moments between Uncle Derek and John. I wish there were more in the show like you've written.
It was really aww-inspiring.
| novashanti chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Well done. I think you captured Derek's internal conflict perfectly. And Kudos on your Cameron also.
| Lady Laurelin chapter 1 . 9/10/2008
“That’s my job..I guess that makes us partners.” And don't you know that just rankles. Very nice perspective! I love Derek as the unknowning/unconscious/whole-hearted father figure.
| heartfallen chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
| graceandfire chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Nice. Nice, well done look into Derek's head, how he's almost reluctantly getting pulled into caring about present-John and the insight he's gaining into how the boy turns into the future-John that Derek knows and doesn't necessarily like.
| starksnstripes chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
awesome story! :D :P
| kristy chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Great start! You have the voices of each of the characters down really well. This is a refreshing new take on the storyline. Keep it going!
| DimpleLala chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I love it! Are you going to write more?
| Embry chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
WOW! I loved this story! you wrote john and derek very well and i can't wait to read more!
| EagleGirl6 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I really enjoyed reading this, it was really well written and fits right in with the show, I think. I'd love to read more from this show...
| devra chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
A wonderful introspective fic that was filled with excellent visuals and characterizations.
| Metroid13 chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Nice interaction, that's all I can basically come up with. The writing is also good, it's not often that I see something done in the present tense, so that was a pleasant surprise. What's more, you didn't fall into the trap most people fall into: inadvertantly switching from present to past, so kudos for that.