Reviews for Pokemon Diamond
camilo chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
me agrada mucho tu forma de escribir se ve que puede crecer mas .que Dios los bendiga a todos,llegue a sus corazones y por todos
Pokedude chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Sigh, I hate it when everything I want to read isnt finished. Still, let me say, this is a great series.
TheNightingale88 chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
A raven girl? I thought Dawn has blue hair. It's funny that you named Barry Willis XD. I love this!
Pokedude chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
One more thing, The rival has 2 names basically. Barry and Daimon.
Pokedude chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Um... AMAZING! (after huffing for 5 minutes.) You sir are pure genius.
12345 chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
need more to read
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
great story you should mak a sequel
licii-chan chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
omg i loved it awsome job thanks

and not to be mean but BTW the blond guys name is Barry
SunnyD chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
please update this story it's really good .
CrystleIceFire chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Love it,please write more, I love it, its off to a good start, I love it. Keep it up, :)
Anon chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
How cute :) Please continue!
KARIN848 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
ParadoxymoroN chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
they arent teenagers, but other than that this is a pretty good story.
God from the Machine chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
"Willis'" name is Barry in the anime and Pearl in the games, take your pick
SlyFoxofPeanutButter chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
puhlease! update! I liked this first chappie!
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