|Reviews for Birthday Boy|
| Mizazu chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
This was good and entertaining, but it could use a bit of work. Try to minimize the use of parentheses, and lessen the caps lock. xD; I hope this helped.
| SchwaWarrior chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Haha. I love it. :) Your writing style reminds me of my own when I was a few years younger, minus the grammatical errors. Poor Jeff, though... I imagine this could be a plausible scenario if the events of Earthbound happened in real life...
It reminds me of me, actually. Of all the times I don't fall asleep at night and instead stay up programming on the computer. Maybe Jeff is an Aspie...?
Also, the Wiimote was a stroke of genius. I don't think they existed in 199X, which is I believe when the game took place, but fics are meant to bend the rules, I say. Nice work. :)
| Daxian chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Wow, I really liked this! Jeff has always been near the top of my favorite characters lists, so reading this made me smile. Great job, and I hope you continue rolling out awesomeness!
| MOTHER MOTHER chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Poor Jeff! He just can't choose one thing! This was a good fic!
| Jeffff chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Jeff is a funny guy!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
WooT! I love EarthBound! Especially MOTHER 3~