|Reviews for Graduation Day|
| Wolf-of-Five-Elements chapter 3 . 12/31/2009
Very nice. I like how you portrayed Lillet's doubts about graduation... I know that it can be a scary thing.
"Decide to dump Amoretta and run off to Albion after that Bartido guy?" Ahaha... made me laugh. )
And Gammel Dore's speech at the end was similar to Dumbledore's speeches... I don't know if that was intentional or not, but I found it amusing nonetheless. P
| DreamShadower chapter 3 . 11/20/2008
Lillet can be really smart, but be really dumb at times too. Of course Amoretta would go with her. :3
Hehe, Advocat really is a great character. .
Aww, Gaff just can't seem to say he wants to go with Lillet on his own. .
| strykemeister chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
That was just lovely! You are a truly skilled writer and you capture the essence of this game so well. I love how you portrayed the characters, they were all spot-on, and the interactions were all excellent, from the humorous exchanges to the fluff between Lillet and Amoretta. Very nice. It was good to see what happens before the game's epilogue.
| Spikesagitta chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
cool, we get to see how she went from farmer daughter, to magician student, world savior(maybe?) and now a full fledge magician and royal mage :)
| Silvara rivana chapter 2 . 4/1/2008
Grins I am betting it's advocat! I can just see him watching them and lusting. it is a devils way after all. Esecilay when an angel's soul is involved. Young love. So happy that lillet's little issue was some what resolved. I would like to know one thing. any idea what happened to Surely? The frog? I know he got smaked in the game haveing beaten it but they never say that it died or got eaten or ran away.
| Spikesagitta chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
that was resolve easy enough
but..what is that devil?
| No Make Girl chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Oh! A new story! I loved your other GrimGrimoire fic and it's great that you're working on another so soon :) I also really happy that it's about Lillet in her early days because I have a soft spot for stories about growing up in life and love.
| Tarma Hartley chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
WELL DONE! :) I like this. :) Very well written-as always!-engaging with crisp and clear conversations and I can clearly see the action in my mind's eye which is good! :)
I like the way you started out with the nightmare scene and then gently segway into the scene with Gaff poking Lillet with a broom to get her up. Excellent transition and descriptions! :)
Can't wait for the update! :)
Great Work & Well Done! :)
| Alouete chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I've always enjoyed your stories of the Grimoire world and I'm ever so glad that you've released yet another one of your entertaining Lilet's adventure. Please do continue, although I wish that you would update more than simply once a week. Please, won't you consider twice?
| Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
i think the term your finding is shoujo ai :) same meaning, but usually without the lemony stuffs
interesting, so this is somewhere after the game and before your other fic?
| Silvara rivana chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
ok... what happens next. can't split lillet up from amoretta. they are ment to be together forever!