|Reviews for Balancing Destinies|
| zhinker chapter 19 . 7/3/2012
Hey, any chance of resuming this story? The Altered Destinies series is my all time favorite fan fiction and it would be a shame to see it left incomplete
(plus I vaguely remember a promise of it not taking a year to post the next update...;)
| ambermam chapter 19 . 6/27/2012
I absolutely love this story line and wish I could read the ending! Please update! :)
| Alltaros chapter 19 . 6/24/2012
I found your stories about a year ago and I loved them. I made myself not check for a whole year, figuring that was more then enough time to get at least one more chapter as it had already been 6 months since the last one...but nothing? come on, dont leave us hanging like this.
| miss potter 20 chapter 19 . 6/17/2012
Omg this story is so amazing after I finished the first one where he went back in time I was so excited that I learnt you made this story to follow on from the last one please update more I would love to see more of this story and maybe some more fleur and Harry and whether they have any kids and I am interested how everything plots within the family and how you will finish it ooooo all I can say is please up date pretty please :)
| Samariffic chapter 19 . 6/17/2012
Are you planning on completing this story? It's really good.
| Kaylen Cooper chapter 19 . 6/15/2012
This is awesome! :)
I look forward to reading more, when it continues.
| hpf2114 chapter 19 . 6/7/2012
This is to good to not finish. dam the writers block, full steam ahead.
| EddGe1987 chapter 19 . 6/7/2012
I have read your first story altered destinies and now i have read this story so far.
Your method of delivery is on par with jk's herself your story draws the reader in and immerses them in a world that we know already from canon but in some respects is better. Harry himself is probably one of the most powerful combat wizards and unlike other stories i have read on ff you have not allowed him to win everything and have made him more human not some superhuman machine, yet you have achieved the blend between human and superhuman perfectly and for this i commend you very well done.
The time twists in this story are i will say original, we both know time travel fics have been done in the past but this is an original concept and to be honest BRILLIANT.
I have read altered destinies several times now and also this current fic i was sad to see you had stopped writing it but reading this newest chapter i have hope once again that you will continue to deliver us one of the best harry potter AU stories on FF
So thank you for your written stories and thank you in advance for this current story.
| Samantha Black chapter 19 . 5/30/2012
I know you've said the next chapter won't take another year...but I fear it's been a bit longer than that
I really, really love your story...I was supposed to write on my BA thesis and instead I've spend the whole day reading your story *lol
I really hope you are going to updating again when you have the time This is just too great a story to be left unfinished.
| LukeStokard chapter 19 . 5/26/2012
I read altered destinies, and balanced destinies...and I must say I liked it very much...
I want to know r u going to continue BD?
Please upload new chapter ASAP...:D
| Frog's princess chapter 19 . 5/21/2012
Don't make promises on websites/public forums. You never know where your muse might run away to or what might happen in your life. In this case you've left many readers in disapointed anticipation, hoping desperately that you'll update but seeing the huge gap since you last did.
Most interesting for me is that you are obviously still around because you are updating other stories.
I only found AD a few days ago and raced through it straight into this story. Your story telling is excellent; though your grammar sometimes slips up, the tale itself more than makes up for it.
I look forward to one day seeing how this plays out.
| MysticSong1978 chapter 19 . 5/20/2012
You are a fantastic author. Truly amazing. I love how you integrated history and time travel so smoothly in Altered and Balancing Destinies. I love time travel stories when they're done right (which yours definitely was), and even better when history is incorporated so flawlessly into the story that it feels real.
I hope you'll come back to this story one day. I know how things get - I'm even further behind updating my fics than you are. I hope to get back to mine sooner than later, but it always seems to be later. :-)
I run a group on Facebook called Recommended Fan Fiction & Fan Videos, and I've added both Altered and Balancing Destinies to the list of HP stories. I notated that while your sequel wasn't done yet, it was still completely worth reading. Simply stunning work. I'm so glad I happened across your stories.
| x3MANDO chapter 19 . 5/18/2012
Great sequel! I'm dying to find out what happens next, please update! It's been more than a year ):
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| Runecutter chapter 19 . 5/12/2012
Definitely more than 11 months ;)
In a certain way this story is even more epic than the great World War / fight against Grindelwald / reforming Voldemort Fiction Altered Destinies has been! After all this is almost completelly a product of your own imagination, even when it has loose connections to the "old" or "canon" HP universe...
But then it's also a horrible low blow to every fan of the first fiction... you're sowing death as if it were cheap candies *sniff*, transforming canon characters like Hermione so they lose almost all of their appeal (but then Viktor and Fleur WON some more character traits and interesting aspects) and starting the whole butcherfest anew *sigh*
I'm constantly torn between getting angry about the many losses Harry has to endure after all he has sacrificed and done for the world and awesome adoration of the things you manage to come up with. The only thing holding me up in the first state is the thought that probably Cresswell will have it come down on him mightily, just to thwart Grindelwalds plans once and for all! And of course the hope that enough of his great family will survive to still let it seem worthwhile when he nonstop puts his hide in between the world and the forces that want it's destruction. But woe to you when you hurt Michele another time... you'll rue the day *insane ranting*
But serious... it's hard on the borderline where it drifts off in very uncomfortable hurt/comfort like angst ridden territories. I think i can see when you try to steer against this trend and put things into it like Fleurs little scene at the end of this chapter, but be careful, at the moment it's not missing much and many dykes might break under the overflow of bad carma... It would be horrific when all this story work and narrative brilliance would go to waste because the Darkness took over too much of your story and the hero got broken beyond repair...
There are soo omany Blacks and Malfoys and Parkinsons to hurt, you don't have to play out your sadistic tendencies solely on Potters *wink wink nudge nudge*
Before i forget it... i've loved the line about the most notorious rumour... "When have the Potters ever gone Dark!" :D Indeed. Maybe it's not too late for hope for the wizarding world...