Reviews for Bad Day
Erratta chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I'm impressed! A whole story done in rhyme! I know that's tricky. You had some problems with your meter, though, but the rhyming was great!

This is a really creative idea for a story. Most people don't use Ghostwriter outside of Christmas. It was a cute and realistic bit of fluff too.

Good job!

~Esme
Daedalos chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Ahaha. That was funny! And you're great with rhymes! Thank you for making me laugh! :D

-chris
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
mess. it's mess dude.

;D,

brittney
Phantom'sShadow94 chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Wow you did this. It's awesome I can never ryhme like this and the DxS was so cute
Jime-chan chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
He has talent... you too! I love this, is funny.
GeekKid chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
That was so good! I could not have gotten all that stuff to rhyme.
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