Reviews for Harry Potter The Last Heir
nicole.howe.737 chapter 80 . 5/24
Hi, I loved your idea's and the way you wrote them. If you are going to continue to write, and I think you should, you should get a better spellcheck program as there are are lot of spelling and grammatical errors in the chapters. That is a minor issue though as the storyline is the main thing and you did it justice. I would have liked some chapters between "The End" and the "Epilogue" explaining how they all reacted to the end of the battle, also about their exams that kept getting mentioned, but that could be just me. I do wonder what happened to Harry after he disappeared with Voldemort and how he came back to them? It was left very open which makes me wonder if you were planning on another confrontation between them at some stage. Did Dudley end up finishing school? Did Harry go to work as an auror or did he stay working at the school? I felt that the epilogue was rushed, as if you caved to reader's pressure to add more to the story, and it didn't really answer much except that they all had kids. I might add that I like stories all finished up with a nice bow and I think that this one hasn't been properly finished yet. The ribbon is lying flat on the table and the tape is peeling off. But that could just be me :)
Guest chapter 55 . 1/4
AconiteAlex chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2017
I loved this book I think you wrote Harry the best way he has been portrayed Very Powerful GREAT Job
RAVENCLAWDISTRICT1 chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
pretty great story
N Umbra chapter 15 . 6/16/2017
It's Glamour not Glimmer
N Umbra chapter 1 . 6/16/2017
You've got to make a sequel! I love this story so much!
NatalyaShae chapter 80 . 4/10/2017
good story!
Guest chapter 80 . 2/11/2017
This is how the story should have ended. I will be re-reading this again.
Bravo chapter 80 . 1/29/2017
Lovely ending but you forgot Dudley and Maria, aww. I was looking forward to meet their kid.
Aqua Aquana chapter 78 . 6/28/2016
Its that one piece song which brook sings bt of Hogwarts version
Nigel chapter 2 . 4/18/2016
Wow...was there no beta or proof reader...
Your English is totally fucked up...
nayin17 chapter 80 . 3/24/2016
It's nice that almost everyone is alive though not a lot of Harry and Ginny moments
nayin17 chapter 73 . 3/24/2016
Why cant Harry just transform to his phoenix form and go back to the Manor
nayin17 chapter 72 . 3/24/2016
Since Harry is the richest bachelor, hmmm maybe I can lend some from him hahahahahahaha
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