Reviews for The Begining of true happiness
Lenny mosca chapter 2 . 5/11
are you going to write a sequel
Lenny mosca chapter 1 . 2/20
I suggest you rewrite the story and call it the return of the Uzumaki clan and have we reestablish the whirlpool country cuz that's where the located in the waves country but you don't even watch the episode if I were you I would go back and rewrite this thing this story has good potential but you wasted it with a nonsensical storyline I hope you take my constructive criticism for this cuz I think it could good story the return of the whirlpool country thank you for reading this review I'm hoping you soon as take the suggestion to heart as I said great potential just go back and fix it and make a good sequel please thank
cody chapter 2 . 4/17/2014
Loved it to hell and back
SSTR87 chapter 2 . 3/26/2014
loved this snippet. It's definitely something I'd want to read more into if you ever wanted to extend it
draco122 chapter 2 . 3/13/2013
wow i love this story a lot.
Draco122
red neo ranger chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
Love it keep it up can't wait to read more
Crystalzap chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
lol well thats one way to do it ;)
puma1sunfire chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
Damn Sweet story. Looking forward to seeing what else you have written.
Rickjames196 chapter 2 . 8/19/2010
boooo i was like coolio a 2 chapter oneshot D it was awesome by the way kukuku..
Lycan91 chapter 2 . 10/22/2009
another awsome story.
Lalaith Quetzalli chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
Quite an interesting story.

I would have never imagined something like this.

I think it is a bit far-fetched, but still pretty good.
Twylyte chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
YAY! That was AWESOME! Take that stupid council peoples! AHAHA! Ah that was just great. Good to see a Naru/Haku that has a different outlook than the 'Naruto/Haku fall in love and the story changes'. I'm still smiling and chuckling to my self about this. Great work!
EDelta88 chapter 2 . 11/17/2008
it's alright, could have been a little longer though
Deathmvp chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
I think this one is a little far fectch if it is cannon but I could see this happeing in a AU with a few changes to the past.
kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
great chapter
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