Reviews for Tigers Dawn Bk 1: The Tiger, The Flame
WarriorAddicted chapter 13 . 7/2/2009
wait... who the heck is demon! ggod job!
WarriorAddicted chapter 12 . 7/2/2009
what... demon? this is good, but allittle short. awwell. keep writing! :)
WarriorAddicted chapter 11 . 7/2/2009
tigerstar reads fast, doesn't he?
WarriorAddicted chapter 10 . 7/2/2009
why did she join, she doesn't want to be in skyclan anymore?
WarriorAddicted chapter 9 . 7/2/2009
how did they get there from the other direction, and WHY!
WarriorAddicted chapter 8 . 7/2/2009
i really like this. you should be an author, you write really well!
WarriorAddicted chapter 6 . 7/2/2009
aww man! i can't continue reading! :( lunch time... anyways, love this story!
WarriorAddicted chapter 5 . 7/2/2009
haha. i really like this story so far good job!
WarriorAddicted chapter 4 . 7/2/2009
tigerstar can count! :O
WarriorAddicted chapter 3 . 7/2/2009
hahahahaha! XD XD XD i love this story!
WarriorAddicted chapter 2 . 7/2/2009
this is good. no, it is REALLY good. i really like it!
WarriorAddicted chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
i like this story so far, i wonder if tigerstar really wanted to be good, he was just under his influence... hm
rainstorm chapter 20 . 2/21/2009
umm how did cats know the rhyme feathertail and tigerpaw sitting in a tree? oh and cats don't have mirrors! other than that its really good! but also umm how did leopardstar loose all her lives?
Soareno chapter 23 . 2/21/2009
Great story! Your conversations were boring in the beginning, but youre finnished with this story. Shouldn't the re-incarnation have a different name the the re-incarnate? usually -heart Tigerheart would be good.
notsosecretlyramona chapter 2 . 2/12/2009
Oh, I've started this before. Shame on me for not continuing ;

I like where this is going. I think you have a good grasp on Tigerstar as a kit. I believe that somewhere in the series, Bluestar described him as being just like other cats, but more intense. The scene with Leafkit really fit that.

The narration is decent. I'd normally reccommend more description, particularly around the dialogue, but I know you've improved since writing this.

Grammar's decent. The only major error I noticed was that you used "your" instead of "you're" a lot. If it can be broken into "you are," you need to use the contraction.

Can't wait to read on! :D
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