Reviews for Hopelessly Mundane
Smithback chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
liked it , a lot...

what was he wathching behing her? just remembering?

luck, bye
Charli800 chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
I rather like this. You've captured the essence of the moment nicely.

I liked Dumbledore's way of hinting that he also believes Divination to be a waste of time, though I didn't follow why he questioned the wisdom of her decision. It seems a little odd that he would throw more doubt into her turmoil. It's only a small issue, though.

Your characterisation starts off beautifully and the dialogue is just about perfect. It slips a little later in the story (Dumbledore could be slightly more inscrutable and Hermione slightly more respectful), but the characters never become unlike themselves.

I think what stands out to me about this piece is the moment that you've made stand out against the hustle and bustle of Hogwarts and the little bit more you bring to my understanding of these characters in a few words.
XxMemories4everxX chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Realy great!
UnluckyAmulet chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Unexpected indeed! But I liked this little interaction with Hermione and Dumbledore. Since it's so rare in the books and everything. I do find it questionable if DD was bad at Divination, but it was a nice moment.

Unlucky Amulet