Reviews for The Puppet Master
infp1079 chapter 6 . 4/6/2008
Oh my! Edward can't read her thoughts! That sure is interesting... I wonder what will happen when he finds out that he can't? And hehe, what a funny train of thoughts when Cammy still thought he could.
legallyxbrunette chapter 14 . 4/6/2008
AW! That's so freaking cute! Paul and Cammy are perfect together, and you are such a good writer!
infp1079 chapter 5 . 4/6/2008
Nice introduction of Bella... and of Paul, too! Hmm, finding out more about the tension between Sam and Paul will certainly be interesting. And do I sense an impending werewolf romance? :-P Geez, Cammy better be more careful with her books.
infp1079 chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
Another excellent chapter! It's great how your writing seems to possess undertones of that Twilight-ish humor that makes the books so loveable. :) And WOW. The scene with Jasper flowed perfectly, and Cammy's "thanks" to Jasper was entirely understandable with the detailed ongoing description of her emotions. Ooh, what will Jasper do?
infp1079 chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
You've captured Carlisle's character very nicely in the chapter, and I'm happy that Cammy was able to come up with a plausible excuse in order to avoid revealing her knowledge to the Cullens right away. Aw, I was just struck with the errant thought that Cammy could quite possibly end up with Jacob (he seems to be the only available male in Twilight :-P), but it's a completely groundless hypothesis at this point as I'm only on chapter three... all right, I'm just going to keep on reading.
DeathByCoffee chapter 14 . 4/6/2008
aww that was a cute chap:)
infp1079 chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
You did an amazing job with dropping little hints towards the reality of the "Twilight" situation throughout this chapter. I thought the conversation with Donna was very original, realistic, and not at all unbelievable, and I also like that Cammy first happens across Jasper instead of a quick and convenient run-in with Edward. Also, the details you include in your writing make it that much more enjoyable to read. :)
infp1079 chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
Ooh, I absolutely love this idea! From this first chapter, I can already tell that Cammy will be a great character, and a refreshing voice to follow throughout the story.
dot823 chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
MellaIsi chapter 14 . 4/6/2008
This is AMAZING.

Keep writing. Soon preferably.
dot823 chapter 3 . 4/6/2008
AH! what's going to happen when she meets Bella and Edward! Edward will read her mind, then they may leave! orr...they bring her/you INTO the group like they did Bella, and you become fans with them! and why does Donna not know who the Cullens or what Twilight is anymore? is it like, most of the time, when you move to Forks or where the Cullens live, everyone you know forgets Twilight or something? weird...yikes...
dot823 chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
O...M...C! this rocks! I adore it...I so have to read more! I would adore this to happen in my life...haha...
TheBestForksAren'tTheShinyOnes chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
Oh my goodness I loved this chapter! It was great. I love how you made Camille the only one who knew about Twilight. That was really cool.
Rosalind Mariero chapter 13 . 4/5/2008
UPDATE NOW! i luv ur story
legallyxbrunette chapter 13 . 4/5/2008
You are a very good writer, and this chapter was written exceptionally well!
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