Reviews for Aftershocks
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Hi! Well done! The story itself is a kind of a staple story, obviously, but since it's about the character and not the plot, it was OK. I liked the style, and the tone, and his terse replies, and the discription of his thoughts. This was really fun to read.
I think this may need some further editing to make it more succict and linguistically correct. Also, I kind of didn't like this departure to her point of view because his point of view is more interesting. Otherwise, it's good.
i'm now reading thru the rest of your stories about this character.
ReKoJ chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Good story. I like how you managed to keep him in character but at the same time give him a human side. Well written.