Reviews for Leaf and Wind Rain and Sand
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Awwwwwwwwwww loved this!
Kandita chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Cute! You should have added another chapter
AmaiNeiko chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
That was such a cute oneshot! I like how he doesn't say very much and how they're both a little puzzled how they feel, although hinata is more confused than gaara. And kankuro bringing in hinatas cooking to share with gaara was amusing, he is a good older brother! Love the goodbye scene most, lucky hina! ;D
alawysmile chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Anime Onnanoko chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Aww kawaii, good story
Pale18 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Temari was funny.
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
love the pairing! this fic is so great is there gonna be a sequel?
BetweenTheSeaAndStars chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
*squel* CUTE!
HinataMorningstar chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
i loved it. really good.
CobaltHeart chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I like Gaara's gift...
ShadowOfAShinobi chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
That was awesome! It was really cute! Oh and Happy one year Anniversary! :)
StrawberriCat chapter 1 . 3/25/2008

cute and no mistakes that i can see but..does it have to end?

can't u write a few more chapters? i'll give u a cookie..

lol great job
midnightblue08 chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
this is so sweet will you write a sequel make it a full length story hahahahha it is s cool

i like the statue and kissing part hahahaha
satomika chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
whoa...that was something...


i'm giggling hard...

that's so cute...


i definitely like NaruHina if it were in the real anime...
SoundzofSilence chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Of course, knowing me and all, I've gladly picked out all your little errors. Well...most of them. There are a couple comma errors I let slip through the net, but I don't want you to hate me for correcting you like an English teacher or something.

Hee hee, nosily yelled out? ("Hey, little bro," Kankuro nosily yelled out. ) Think me you mean 'noisily'? Yes, I love rewriting my questions so they look and sound awkward both to the mind and mouth. . It's fun in an almost Shakespearean way.

Disguested? Is that when one disses their guest? Perhaps you would prefer 'disgusted'? And some commas on the side? (Revised: Gaara sat, disgusted, as his brother piled the food into his mouth, chewing loudly.) Wait, isn't Gaara already sitting down in his seat? When did he stand? O.o

Ha ha ha! How coy and trixsy of Gaara! Licking her chin! . That sounds like something I would do, but to disgust someone.
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