|Reviews for Dinosaurs, PTSD and Museum Visiting Hours|
| Cocoaflower chapter 1 . 1/4
Aww, that's adorable! :D
| Jamie chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Even the carnivores of the dinosaurs won't mess with: Argentinosaurus The Biggest Herbivore Ever! 3 am: A pack of 9 Deinonychus wake up, something enormous arrives. ''Its 12 foot!'' said the youngest.
They had supper before seeing it. The pack leader demanded that the fowl beast shall be defeated.
The mother said ''I wonder if it's headed towards us,'' the pack saw it was an Iguanadont. First they ate a iguana, then chased the Iguanadont. They raced on the ground for 10 miles, until the Iguanadont got tired and weak. The Deinonychus attacked with their 'terrible claws,' for a moment. Then they looked back to see a Tyrannosaurus Rex! They got aggressive and angry, they slashed with their claws. But Tyrannosaurus Rex survived and nearly killed the oldest: The Pack Leader. He lashed around to see a bigger creature than him! Dragonosaurus Terractycus. It was Dragon-like and deadly, the pack leader of the deinonychus pack was madder than 100000000000000000000 T-Rex packs together. Then the 2 giant creatures clashed, the Dragonosaurus Terratycus & T-rex bit each other, and they died 1 year afterwards. The Deinonychus were hungry. They all sang together. 4 am: They yawned because they got up earlier that day.
| Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Love family moments. Great insight into the less than humorous parts.
| Jenihenpen chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
This was just so tender and gorgeous and precious!
| Pacerpaw chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
| thehappystalkerball chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
That was really cool! Like how the others were, like, traumatized by the dinosaur event while Donnie only becomes more interested, lol!
I really liked the Don and Raph interaction, poor Raph freaking out in two seconds flat! Don't blame him, though! And Donnie not acting annoyed about Raph's flipout but thanking him instead for coming. It was great to read!
| Aeryn Lavanthia chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Loved it! You write Don and Raph so well, I'd love to see you do an all out action/adventure story. You'd be great!
| Tink17 chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Wonderful story! Love the brotherly connection, especially at the end. Thanks for sharing!
| Sambev chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
Good job, I like reading little moments like that. :D
| Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
It's nice to see these two brothers interact. Though I got a little laugh at Raph, wondering why they came back to the dinosaur exhibit after being stuck in the prehistoric times for three months.
/Moments like this are why Raph couldn't let Don come up here to the museum by himself, why Mike follows Donnie to the junkyard to go supply hunting, why Leo tags along whenever Don wanders off to talk techno with April. It's why they don't let him work on the van by himself at night, why someone's always in the mood to stay up and watch the Late, Late Show when Don's pulling an all-nighter in the lab and why he hasn't had to do a solo patrol in the five weeks since he came back./
Don't you just love it whenever brothers are overprotective over each other? Especially after the Good Genes episode, one of my favourite episodes.
| Mendeia chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
This is really nicely done. I love the fluid way you mix the two recent events of the trip back in time and the "Good Genes" saga into something really in character and touching. And I think you've got both Raph and Donnie down beautifully. I love Raph's inner monologue, his feelings about how it must have hurt to have not been there when Don needed them the most.
Thanks for this. Best thing I've found all night!
| VGiselleH chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I love and adore this fic, what a wonderful read! You did a great job writing this one, you really did. What a great Raph insight, well, insight into all of them after that whole ordeal with Don going monster on them. I wish they'd done a bit more with it, so it's great to see a fic like this deal with it instead to make up for it. I love it when Don and Raph get some time together, it never fails to deliver something worth watching/reading.
| 54Viruses chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I'm so proud of Raph, he shows great restraint.
(I grab Donnie and drag him back to the lab for a full physical exam and blood run-up)
Fantastic story. You did a really good job.
| Princess Tyler Briefs chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I can't remember if I reviewed this on LJ or not. I think I did. I have to again, at any rate.
This is probably one of the best Raph and Donnie stories I've ever read. It's so very much like them to say so much with so few words out loud. Raph is every inch an over protective big brother, and Donnie is very much a little brother with an independent streak. They're adorable, and fun, and this story captures their dynamic perfectly.
It's sweet and still makes me laugh.
| jaxink chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
*sigh* I love this story! I read it not too long ago on livejournal...I think. Someone was looking for it in the Lost and Found section on Stealthy Stories, and a link was provided by someone else.
It's a perfect moment of insight into Donnie and Raph's relationship-just being brothers. I always adore seeing them together and interacting...a rare occurrence, unfortunately, in the realm of fanfiction. Little glimpses like this are wonderful, with small things like "a look of fond exasperation" and "Don's all right. They're -all- all right." Aw...
Raph is protective without being overbearing. Don is, well, Donnie. I quite enjoy your portrayal of him.
Can't say I have any criticism to offer, other than I'd love to see it expanded upon. But it's wonderful the way it is.