|Reviews for That's Showbiz!|
| Amber chapter 3 . 5/17
Um, Ren is only 4 years older than Kyoko, so if she's turning eighteen he should still be 21 and turning 22 in Febuary
| Mischief101 chapter 3 . 5/7
I like the story so far. It's great. Just one little thing bothers me, you said Ren was 25 but if Kyoko is 18 Ren should be 22 because he's 4 years older than her.
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/28
Kun is if there younger San is for elders
| D3ATHR0SE chapter 3 . 3/14
Just wanted to let ya know, if Kyoko is 18, Ren is 22, not 25 like you typed, otherwise, I really love the story :)
| Hailley chapter 3 . 10/10/2014
if ren is 25 and kyoko is 18 that's a 7 year difference. ren is only 4 years older than kyoko.
| missshay16 chapter 3 . 12/27/2013
Ok I just realised that you have Ren down as 25 and Kyoko as 18 but there is only a 4 year difference between them in the Manga and Anime. Except if you did it for a special reason
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
not a "breastplate" that is a piece of armor, you probably mean collarbone, clavicle, or if you mean the sternum (the place between your breast). Just thought you should know that Ren wasn't kissing her Armour.
| animemangaobsessed chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
Nice! Keep it up!
| mira10 chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
The age difference between Ren and Kyoko is 4 years. I noticed you used 7. •﹏•
| The Unlucky Ducky chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
when i read this line:
"In this story, the heroine -Kyoko- was to fall in love with her 26-year-old teacher, Kimichi Touya. He is the newest, younger, and only male teacher. "
i was like:
"and we all know who the new teacher is...its totally not doing to be ren tsruga, nooo that would be impossibe(sarcasm to the max)"
| RosesAreForever23 chapter 12 . 3/30/2013
I loved this so much! I wish it wasn't over. But, unfortunately, it is. I think my favorite parts in this story would be his telling her he loved her and her 'father', Kuu, forcing her to answer his questions. I had a ball at that one! Great job, overall, with the story!
| JackFrost14 chapter 12 . 6/15/2012
| blackbloodywolf chapter 12 . 6/1/2012
| AnimeLover'sInTown chapter 4 . 11/12/2011
You made Ren 25 and Kyoko 18, that's a 7 year difference.
| pwenie chapter 12 . 11/8/2011
Nice! Hope you update soon :)!