Reviews for That's Showbiz!
Wencinator chapter 4 . 11/30/2017
In the previous chapter you said that ren was 25 but he and kyoko are only 4 years apar in the Manga. By that logic, if you're writing kyouko as 18 years old, the ren should be 22...Not 25!
BB71 chapter 12 . 6/2/2016
Are you going to finish this ff because I'm very interested in what happens next for them
Guest chapter 12 . 2/28/2016
Ok I've only just read this terrific writing beginning to end but I thought you should have expressed more at the en for Kyoko n Ren because it seems to me he'd have some conflicting feelings and I'd loved to have herd him speak with her about them (oh as to the meeting with kuu n still missing his mother ) n the possessiveness of ren not being able to be free in regards to touching her in front of kuu so to scene alone in apartment with said girlfriend so wish it were longer but it's your story n concluded so I can fill it in for myself thnx for the hard work you did a great job
Guest chapter 6 . 10/3/2015
Fyi, kotonami (aka moko san) already knows when kyokos birthday is because of the greatful party on her 17th birthday (which according to this story, it was last year)
Guest chapter 3 . 10/3/2015
Kyoko and ren are 4 years apart! If this is happening at kyokos 18th birthday, then ren can't be 25 years old...
Amber chapter 3 . 5/17/2015
Um, Ren is only 4 years older than Kyoko, so if she's turning eighteen he should still be 21 and turning 22 in Febuary
Mischief101 chapter 3 . 5/7/2015
I like the story so far. It's great. Just one little thing bothers me, you said Ren was 25 but if Kyoko is 18 Ren should be 22 because he's 4 years older than her.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/28/2015
Kun is if there younger San is for elders
D3ATHR0SE chapter 3 . 3/14/2015
Just wanted to let ya know, if Kyoko is 18, Ren is 22, not 25 like you typed, otherwise, I really love the story :)
Hailley chapter 3 . 10/10/2014
if ren is 25 and kyoko is 18 that's a 7 year difference. ren is only 4 years older than kyoko.
missshay16 chapter 3 . 12/27/2013
Ok I just realised that you have Ren down as 25 and Kyoko as 18 but there is only a 4 year difference between them in the Manga and Anime. Except if you did it for a special reason
Guest chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
not a "breastplate" that is a piece of armor, you probably mean collarbone, clavicle, or if you mean the sternum (the place between your breast). Just thought you should know that Ren wasn't kissing her Armour.
animemangaobsessed chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
Nice! Keep it up!
mira10 chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
The age difference between Ren and Kyoko is 4 years. I noticed you used 7. •﹏•
The Unlucky Ducky chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
when i read this line:
"In this story, the heroine -Kyoko- was to fall in love with her 26-year-old teacher, Kimichi Touya. He is the newest, younger, and only male teacher. "
i was like:
"and we all know who the new teacher is...its totally not doing to be ren tsruga, nooo that would be impossibe(sarcasm to the max)"
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