Reviews for The One in the Shadows
ThatOneGuyWhoWroteThatOneStory chapter 2 . 9/5/2014
Both pairing ideas are bad, Harry/Daphne all the way
Rosalie Cullen chapter 47 . 8/7/2014
It is wonderful, till here. Actually, can't you put some reason behind Tom Riddle's attacts and prejudice upon muggle borns and muggles and let Harry join him? I really like that character.
1066wthec chapter 47 . 7/27/2014
intersting chapter
1066wthec chapter 35 . 7/27/2014
thought suki was supposed to be shy?
1066wthec chapter 32 . 7/27/2014
the pairings not not allis or whatever any more; hope its white or gray; suki seems more interesting...
1066wthec chapter 28 . 7/27/2014
nice chapter
1066wthec chapter 6 . 7/27/2014
Arceliaaaa chapter 17 . 7/7/2014
Snape sounded so much like Ollivander:

"Great things"

Is that a good thing that I would think that? :/
Phoniex Fire Pixie chapter 47 . 2/16/2014
I can't wait to read more it's a great story
tabi24 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
Guest chapter 5 . 11/16/2013
Meh always has to be American OC, ever heard of the continent of Europe? For Athena's sake! 'You know how I feel about the word' - WTF, Harry should be colder...much more!

Also might I add that I'm saddened that Harry 'Immediately softened' when he saw a random girl? Doesn't make any sense...people just don't soften when they see random women in the streets!

Guest chapter 47 . 11/5/2013
what happened to harry's animagus form?
Guest chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
He should be paired with Aliss! they would be so cute!
Guest chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
There are so many cliques. The American OC threw me off before you even really started the story.
Kurogami Mika chapter 40 . 8/11/2013
This Chapter made me a little sad...
are they not going to be a couple?
I also reckon that Harry is great as a slytherin!
please update soon!
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