|Reviews for The One in the Shadows|
| garrett627 chapter 4 . 4/1/2008
I love the story so far keep up the good work I can't wait for more:):):)
| Katsy17 chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
| jayley chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
did he just say he'd help kill dumbledore? wtf
| jabarber69 chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
Hey I like your story, it has kind of a mystery and whatnot to it! I also think you ought to make Harry the bwl, but nobody knows it, remember when he was in his room and rub his scar. I would love to see his parents faces let alone the rest of the school and wiz world when they find out that he is the real bwl and not his brother! hehehehehe that would be so cool. I dont think he will or need to join voldie, I was also going to say he should hook up with daphne but looks like she is taken, how about tracey or even a female blaise. Now the question is what were the incredients he sold at the apothecary and what was it that he did for issac the snake!
| Tx-Dancegirl-9657 chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
Brilliant story, keep up the great work!
| dexterZ chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
a different approach in showing harry's final year instead of the usual touchy feely neglected and abuse crap...good show
| Maximum Ride all the way chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
wow that was a cliff hanger loved it
| ShadowCub chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
I was hoping for a HP/DM .
| JClayton chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
I think Harry OC, but not super powered or uber-troubled or Mary Sue ish, kinda above average but quirky, yeah
Liked this one, Ron is very biased though isn't he, who's head girl... OC?
You know you could pair him with Susan Bones or someone
| iMessing chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
Love the story and the new chapter
Will this story have harry paired with someone and if yes ,Who ?
| ShadowCub chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
PLEASE get rid of Jennifer Anne Black already one of the
most annoying characters, I'd rather see Ginny and I hate her.
| Maximum Ride all the way chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
so glad its not a slash i hate slashes and this is a realy good story can't wait for more
| Midday Moonlight chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
good good good can't wait for more
| tonksiscool chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
You have a lot to explain:
How did the Potters survive?
If Thomas is hailed as the BWL, but Lilly and James wherent killd by Lord Voldemort, what happend?
How come Sirius is married, has a Family? (Of course I am happy for him!)
I am really curious about the past 6 years ... what adventures did Thomas and Harry have, similar to canon or not? What of OOTP and HBP happend in your World? Obviously your Story is an AU.
Is Dumbledore alive?
I do like your Slytherin Harry.
Quidditch Captain is plausible for me, but how come Head Boy?
Ron was very sterotype ... but what else can one write, he IS Ron after all, very prejudiced against Slytherin. Small error:
I think he would not use the Dark Lords name, he would always say "You-now-who", not "Voldemort".
I guess Harry sold some Baselik skin or scales, teeth or something like that?
How did Lord Voldemort come back, as in canon at the end of 4 year, or in some different way?
Whose blood was used in the resurrection ritual: Thomass or Harrys?
You mentioned that Harry has a scar .. hmm I guess HE is the real BWL, not Thomas?
Please update soon!
| allie chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
i hope it is either oc or some other person but not canon cuz i really like your story