Reviews for The One in the Shadows
kubas89 chapter 10 . 4/13/2008
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 10 . 4/13/2008
I like the Harry/Aliss pairing personally. I loved this chapter, please update as soon as possible.
Gasanechi chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
i vote aliss for harry, and please dont put harry/many, harry/harem or harry/two girls, you get the point i suppose?

anyway, whats the extent of harry's full power throughout the fic? can he beat voldy with his powers?

well, keep up the good work and update soon

Lady Jacqueline chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
very interesting so far. Personally Luna would be a bit of both yeah!

Harry/Luna yep! Thomas/Aliss yep!
JClayton chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
Nice match. will we see/near the Gryffs reaction, really like how this is going btw..
JClayton chapter 9 . 4/12/2008
hpnut1 chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
I liked it!
Frankenstitch chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
Arm... Draco hurt his arm not leg, Luna at one ppoint said leg.

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Yea, I thought that was why Snape calls him Evans. I also thought it was a way of saying "I don't 100% hate you" plus the fact there are two Potters and that would get confusing. Yea, I hate Harry/Ginny pairings (well most of them, I think I liked one) but I like HArry/HErmione pairings a lot. I think that you should have this story be a Harry/Aliss. Do you know what's funny, you talked about the pairings like I asked what pairing this story will be... I don't think I did, I assumed you would make it Harry/Aliss since the thing said HArry/OC. Aliss is one of you made up characters, right?

By the way will you tell me what a cannon is?
SnOwWoLfGoDdEsS chapter 10 . 4/12/2008
aliss or susan 4 harry!
Frankenstitch chapter 9 . 4/12/2008
Why did Snape call Harry "Evans" and not "Potter"?
Frankenstitch chapter 4 . 4/12/2008
Haha, I like the snake.
Frankenstitch chapter 2 . 4/12/2008
WHAT IS A CANNON! I must've asked that to 10 authors in my reviews and none of them answer me, I'm hoping you will.

By the way, what was the item Harry sold, or will you not tell me?
kubas89 chapter 6 . 4/12/2008
sweetgirl23 chapter 9 . 4/12/2008
I really like this story. I understand your point on James and Lily. They are not abusive but they not as loving to Harry as they are to Thomas. Harry is not evil I would say that he is dark and realistic. The way you protray Ron is on point in my opinion. My only question is how is Hary and Thomas's relationship? Do they have loving brotherly realtionship or is it more innocent sibliary riviary or they just don't get along with each other? I like the new character. Can't wait to see how she plays out with Harry. I know this is my personal opinion and wish but please don't pair Harry with Ginny. Keep up the good work. I am looking foward to the next chapter.
wh0t chapter 9 . 4/12/2008
Thanks for the answer to the review ,

I suppose that answers all the questions that I have for the story so far .

Loved the new chapter and was a bit surprised that in the last chapter that people were impatient enough to demand the answers to everything in the story .

Love the story and can't wait for a new chappie ,

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