Reviews for The One in the Shadows
brwneyedgrl chapter 9 . 4/12/2008
Great Chapter, i loved how you had snape call harry evans. I would love to see more interaction between harry and snape. i love when those two get along. i love your plot though. it shows harry as something diff and not evil beyond belief. Great Job
Airlady chapter 9 . 4/11/2008
At least Harry and Aliss are talking again. Good job with Theo.
hpnut1 chapter 9 . 4/11/2008
I like it so far!
Merritt chapter 8 . 4/10/2008
why does Dumbledore not know about the Horcruxes?
JClayton chapter 8 . 4/9/2008
I think that clears up alot, yeah so good...
brwneyedgrl chapter 8 . 4/9/2008
well that was very nice of you to tell everyone that. It sucks that some people are to dumb to let you tell them in your own time or to try to figure it out on there own. I love your story and also the way you write. Sometimes authors go so in depth that you almost feel like skipping half of it to get to the real stuff. So dont let people make you feel bad about your writting or chapters. I love it and you are the author. Write the way you want to and let people deal with it. Great Job!
ubetiburn chapter 7 . 4/8/2008
I read this short flick hoping that it would be good. It's vauge and splotchy at best and you basically claim that you can not understand why you had but four reviews in five or six chapters. Let me see...Short chapters with no depth. The people are shallow and seeing as though it is AU you gave none of us readers any real insight. Harry has had access to the chamber for how many years? What kind of parents were they? paragraph is rather slim. What knowledge or skills does he have or is trying to obtain? His brother got in the TWT? Why not Harry? How slow or dim witted is his brother? What did Harry trade for the money at the apothocary? Is the diary Tom Riddle's? What took place in your fic that took place in the fics that are real? Does the BEL play a mean game of Quidditch? Minnie treat Harry like a lepper?
Airlady chapter 7 . 4/7/2008
Things were going so well in Hogsmeade until Ron interrupted. Nice writing.
XcrimsonroseX chapter 7 . 4/7/2008
That was AWSOME! Hope you update soon!
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 7 . 4/7/2008
I love this story so far, please update as soon as possible.
wh0t chapter 7 . 4/7/2008
Nice new chapter ,

I was sent two e-mails about this chapter and when I clicked the first I got a message saying that new chapters wouldn't be shown for 15 mins then I got another e-mail and it worked ?

Nice new chappie

Is Harry going to end up with Aliss?

and is james and Lily going to show up much in this story ?


lol chapter 3 . 4/7/2008
"it’s only been a day since the last update, so consider it a bonus."

your "chapters" can hardly be called that, most people without disabilities can dish out 60 words in about 1.5 hours (that is including all the editing and proof reading, correcting and posting on the website)
anonymous chapter 6 . 4/6/2008
Well I'm so glad Harry's not being abused because his brother is the boy who lived like some people like to write about... The whole "wrong-boy-who-lived" cliche has a lot of potential if done properly and if the characters aren't completely OOC. Well done.

Draco/Hermione... sounds interesting!
Maximum Ride all the way chapter 6 . 4/5/2008
i like it so are like ron and hermine together
Katsy17 chapter 6 . 4/5/2008
nice :)
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