Reviews for A Half Birthday Surprise
Strayedwolf94 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
what does half bday mean?
Paradoxial-Existence chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
thanks for the warning.. but i dont need them.. lolz :D

nice lemons for a first one :) ahihihihi
sa3 chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Princess-Meru chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
You are a brave, brave girl for writing lemon. I commend you! This was cute and a lot of the tiny mistakes are forgiven because it was your first. Like with sex, it isn't always stupendous the first time :P but you did a REALLY good job - I was moved, and I don't even know the characters!
cagallirockz chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
damn athrun couldnt even get a ring:)
cottongreentea chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
You did a great work on the this story! I would've never had the courage to write a lemon fic; only suggestive i would write. But all in all, i'm glad your friend challenged you to write this fic!
IcedWings chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Cute, sweet, short, simple.
Danya chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I love this story and I love you! Thank you so much for being awesome. I would love this story no matter where it went because you wrote it and everything you write is so exciting for me to read. Of course it doesn't hurt that I LOVE this pairing, so really the mixture of you writing the story and it being about them makes this story extra extra awesome special! I hope that made sense :)
Milisante chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I really have no idea what the halfbirthday is

But this fic is really nice

It's a good try for the first lemon, a little bit rushed, but nice

And I'm very happy it's a happy ending Cute

Good work