|Reviews for Memoirs of an Invisible Man|
| remembermidnight101 chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
WOW! I'm speechless so far I've only read the first two chapters and I have never before seen the Phantom of the Opera, read it or otherwise, anyways, I think you have pure gold on your hands! Its wonderful! I love it! It is absolutely riveting. Keep writing for the world would be lost without more writers like you. Thanks.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 5 . 4/14/2008
| Erika Dyer chapter 5 . 4/12/2008
wow. poor Erik, I hope this is an EC, and he finds some love at last.
| Bathsheba Carr chapter 5 . 4/11/2008
Good heavens. Erik angst unleashed. But I do like the fact that you're tracing his life through-your backstory is very nicely detailed. The agony and depression seems just a bit unrelenting-perhaps one of the shorter enties could concern only Christine? Just a suggestion. Keep up the great work
| BleedingHeartConservative chapter 3 . 4/2/2008
I got distracted and forgot to review chapter 2, but I'm back to comment on chapter 3. You've got an amazing ability with FINAL LINES! I love this one too. I mean, I like this whole little piece, and naturally I'm wondering if the girl is Christine (it must be!) but your final lines are what really impress me. Good work!
| BleedingHeartConservative chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
Okay, I liked it all the way through. There are a few little typos and grammatical things... but overall, it was good. But the last line-that idea of sitting in front of all the mirrors to punish himself-THAT was spectacular.
| ThePhantomsFlutist chapter 4 . 4/1/2008
Aww.. this is kinda cute! Erik's still the madkid he is, but he explains himself! Poor guy... Well, I can't wait until you update and get further into the story. Gives me something to read..
| de-el-dale chapter 2 . 4/1/2008
very well written.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
The religious thing kind of reminds me of Huck Finn. Sorry, I've just finished reading the novel. I like it.
| Jungle Jenna chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
I really like it. I'm excited to read on. How long do you plan to make this?
| Wellthat'slife chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
The reason I read this was because well... actually I was thinking of a title for this stroy I had in mind. It has nothing to do with POTO and I the idea of memoirs of an invisible man came to me. So I was very suprised to see it here. (of course the story Idea was thrown away. I have commitment issues) I loved it and want more I tell you more! Sorry, but very well written. I like the way you get really attached and then suddenly he will say something horrible with detahces you. Well written and can't wait for more.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
Is it Christine? You're doing well. Keep going.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 2 . 3/29/2008
I wish Erik had more than just his brother to care for him. Please keep going.
| that one chicken chapter 2 . 3/28/2008
You've done an excellent job so far, I'll be waiting for more.
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
This is so sad, but yet I really like the view of Erik. I think you should continue.
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