Reviews for Unexpected Saiyan
Guest chapter 8 . 4/2
You ruined it by calling her Jamie
AndyKellerGAME chapter 21 . 12/2/2013
Great Story! Keep continuing please!
Jason chapter 20 . 9/16/2013
Hi I really like it your story can u continue the story like when it's talking about Jamie n gohan
Awwy chapter 21 . 9/15/2013
A great story I enjoyed reading it, such a shame your not updating, its refreshing and counters the usual gohan videl match ups :D again good work! cheers :)
OceanNinja chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
Have to agree with more of the preteen but keep it up! This is awesome!
star girl chapter 21 . 2/10/2013
I loved it!
mrs. briefs997 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
You've got a good plot going, but there are quite a few grammar mistakes in this and its a little hard to follow.
dbzlover55 chapter 21 . 12/2/2012
Awesome please upload new chapters soon
Guest chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
Hahahaha! Nice story so far :-D
ULTIMATEDRAGONBALLZFANGIRL56 chapter 7 . 9/30/2012
please post more of them but as preteens its kool and cute
gohan123 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
make more chapters of them as preteens pls its way better
gohan123 chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
make more chapters when their pre teen its way more interesting
Jirouto chapter 16 . 8/5/2012
GAH now i hate videl dammit why did jamie have to leave...still nice job
Jirouto chapter 10 . 8/4/2012
i love this so far keep it up
Guest chapter 21 . 8/4/2012
great story please continue
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