Reviews for The Inn
Donners chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
this is good but needs to be rapped up with how they all handle it otherwise a good story
JWG chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
No matter what you say, this is not complete. It needs - no, it deserves - the back story and the continuation.

I encourage you to develop this. It has the potential to be quite good and humorous.

Write something every day.

-JW
OrionPax09 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
This was a fun one, but seriously, how could you label this story as complete? Personally, I'd to see you extend the story a bit, with everybody reacting to the new 'girls' and having them chase down the twits who transformed them!

And how the heck did the Nerima Wrecking Crew get those free invitations, anway? I'd like to get some more story, please!
kazekagesama23 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Very interesting...I must admit, I'm intrigued. And it's so nice to see a grammatically correct and well written story.

I've been slogging through the Naruto area. The amount of bad yaoi fanfiction is enough to crush a lesser person.

But anyway, very nice story. Hope to see some more.
bwatt chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
it's a neat story I like it and hope it continues and thanks for the heads up on Mashiro’s castle some of the art is good