Reviews for Hollow
DX chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
Stop! You made me cry! Why can't you write happy fan fiction for once? Please? Here I'll make a request. Make a Murtagh and Eragon fan fic that ends happy for them both and not one that is a cliffie or anything. Make it completely final so they get a happy ending for once! I demand that you do!
KathrenCullen18 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Why must your writing be soooooo good and soooooooooooooooo sad at the same time? How could Eragon do that!
Beautiful Feather chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
I was super excited when I saw that the other story did indeed have a sequel, but this one makes me sad too. You are an excellent writer!

B.F.
TheNightmareBeforeDawn chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I CRIED while reading this it's so sad. WHy did you have to end it that way? Poor Murtagh...
Seren-TheStar chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Hi there! I have read your story "Autumn Bliss" during the last three days, consumed more like, and what can I say, I just LOVED it! It is truly the best Inheritance cycle FF that I have come across so far! I loved the way the relationship between Murtagh and Eragon developed, plus you made sure that it was not only one sided, you know not only Murtagh caring for Eragon, but also vice versa in the later chapters. I should have left a few comments there as well, but I did not find the time to. Sorry about that!

Anyways, after I finished AB today, I was desperately looking for a sequel and "Shattered" and "Hollow" are really amazing as a prolog for a sequel, I mean I hate to see Murtagh and Eragon apart, but there has to be a dramatic storyline after all, and this one looks really promising! Especially "Hollow" is beautifully written and had me transfixed, if that is the right word to describe it, and (in my opinion at least) you always manage it so very well to keep Murtagh in character, who is actually my favourite character in the Inheritance CycleD

But, ... Oh Gosh! PLEASE! You cannot possibly leave it like this! I mean I know you can not finish a sequel within the year, but please do not abandon it completely. You really are a brilliant writer, I am sure you can do it!

Until then, thank you so much for what you have written so far! Great entertainmentD

Greetings and all the best, Seren.
luna13 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
ah, what have you done? i need a happy ending, this one made me cry.

what youve done to them was not fair.

but youre wirting skills are amazing, i love to read youre work!

So, ich hatte das gefül ichmüsste auf englisch schreiben. ;)

nein mal ehrlich, du schreibst wunderbar, es ist so leicht sich in deiner ff zu verlieren und alles nachzufühlen..hast mich zum heulen gebracht damit..

wenn ich mir vorstelle das wäre das ende...der fluss den ich heule reicht von mir bis zur ostsee...naja, is nicht ganz so weit, aber ein paar kilometer schon. ;)

wie gesagt, du bist klasse!

liebe grüße aus dem hohen norden,

luna13
CrosbyFan chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
OMG, you just broke my heart.
Mary-before I became a member chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
Again, fantastic story. I must say, all of your stories are magnificent! *smile* Both of them were written with a lot of detailed emotion, which for some reason escapes a lot of fanfiction writers. *chuckle* Can't wait to read more from you. Will you write another sequel?
NerdyNel chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Complete! WTF? This story is not, repeat, not complete. You cannot leave it like this and...steal their happiness, along with mine and everyone else who reads this blasted story! *Checks date* Two years? I guess there's no hope. *Headdesk*

Well, the writing itself is a brilliant piece of work. Great job with first person - I find it seldom works well. You take us to the depths of Murtagh's agony and despair in life away from his love to that oh-so-welcome glimmer of hope. And then, since you are a sadist[ic genius], the end.

Please, please post the sequel to Autumn Bliss!
lonelylittlewolf chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Oh God!

So tragic, yet so beautiful. I love the angst. But I hate it that you make Eragon married Nasuada. TTTT It's because of her they broke up. I hate her. Sorry if I'm rambling. Good fic.
xXxStarStrifexXx chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
Why can't they be happy? That was beautifully written.
egyptiandreamer13 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
omg you must write the sequel to autumn bliss. i cannot stand this cliffhanger you have left me! otherwise fantastic job but my goodness you must write more.
ChibiItachi-chan chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
*is even sadder than before...*
Gabriel Dragonheart chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
They're both so angsty...you're making me cry. But they're both good fics tho. I like angsty fics...
re-harakhti chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Oh, for the love of humanity - give us a happy sequel to the 'Shattered' and 'Hollow' series!

I need to see the boys happy and together; please, please, please!
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