|Reviews for Mortal Adversary|
| Chaotic-Masterpiece chapter 6 . 7/15/2013
How sad that this hasn't been updated in such a long time! We haven't even really gotten into the real meat of things I think, such as Jareth's true motives or how exactly he plans to unleash his "full powers"... That being said, it is, as usual, a great start, and hopefully there will be more to come!
| SharpestSatire chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
Please oh please update! I know it's been a while, but do you have any more written? Or can you just add one last chapter to pull everything together if you can't make it longer than this?
| Amy chapter 6 . 7/10/2012
I love this!
There aren't a lot of dark Jareth stories out there, so good on you for doing one. And doing it so brilliantly! Your writing style is amazing, I've read a few of your stories and they're all incredible. You really have a talent for writing. :)
| Northstar1 chapter 6 . 5/30/2012
Wow. I'm so glad to find an author like you, who takes such pains to make story and characters 'in character' and believable. I admit, I found this one by way of your profile via World Under Siege. Ihope you find the chance to continue it one day, as I love the adult perspective of Sarah. Thanks for the read, and good luck with this summer!
| none654321 chapter 6 . 5/23/2012
This is a really good story, are you still working on it? It would be a shame if it's been abandoned, you have both of the characters down to a T. I'll keep my fingers crossed that you'll come back to it at some point :)
| Taneva Rose chapter 6 . 12/22/2011
Ilove your fics and find myself consistantly dissapointed when you don't finish them. :(
| Feline Grace chapter 6 . 5/31/2011
OH MY GOSH! I really loved the last two chapters. I like this Jareth...but I hope that he likes Sarah just like he did in the book (And what noone knew what that the Goblin King had fallen in love with the girl and had given her special powers yadda yadda yeah). This is sooo intense! I went to your journal website to see if I could contact you and beg you to write the next chap, but it wouldn't let me do anything except look at the posts you had (by the way I've read about 13 out of the 100 book's list _)
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/28/2011
Interested in how this will turn out. I wonder how Sarah will approach the Labyrinth now as a mature adult? Anyway, your writing is well done and I hope you update soon. :D
| childishmistake chapter 5 . 5/24/2011
This is nuts.. Good but nuts. When will you update?
| Kaytori chapter 5 . 5/23/2011
Another awesome chap can't wait for the next really like how you write J and S
| Aysuh chapter 4 . 5/20/2011
There was so much tension in this chapter that you could cut it with a knife! Really loved it! :D Sarah is full of ressources and I can,t wait to read more about that little ''contest'' between the both of them and how she will do about it!:D I'm glad you finally updated!:D
| Kaytori chapter 4 . 5/20/2011
Awesome fic I love Jareth here update soon!
| jodie rae xx chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
| S.R Devaste chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
I'm loving this story. I love situations where it's not clear how Jareth feels about Sarah.
| hazlgrnLizzy chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
An interesting chapter!