Reviews for Sex in a Battlefied
Mukuro234 chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Hehe very interesting lol
Dead account no longer here chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
...u said naruGaa. That was gaanaru. It was pretty good for a seme Gaara though. I don't like it when Gaara's a seme but he can be one cause he's a ukish seme but whatever. It was alright
ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
This was a gaanaru
TheHyperLlamaWithPocky chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
This story is Ah-MAZING. if i were to make a sentence, it would require many versions of the word 'Fuck'. so all in all. i loved it. :D
Snow chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
*Passes out from a violent nose bleed*
AnikoComik chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
You forgot to take off the shoes when undressing them. Wikid story.
Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Kind of dark and morbid...BUT! I liked it! Hehehe
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
This was hott..! xD

Great job..! Keep up the good work [
Oana-chan chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
You didn't tell me this was a gay thing...it took me a while to understand that you were speaking about boys..the "he did,he told" stuff confused me a bit at the bieginning 'till I understood that it was about 2 ninja...as I don't know the Naruto stories,I thought Gaara was girl XD...anyway,now I KNOW! :P

NICE JOB!

"Naruto stilled his grinding at the feel of cold fingers around his manhood, squeezing lightly to gain attention."- this is my favourite part )) :P
Hard and Horny Nude InuYasha chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Very original.l've never read a lemon with this kind of ' me a dobe if you must but does nin stand for ninja?

Nude InuYasha
Z chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
*mouth open wide drools* that was graet
A.D. Williams chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
Lol! You and I are on the same page! But I'm a humorous writer and though I might've hinted at a yaoi couple in some of my stories (though for humor's sake more than anything), I don't think I could ever try to write a story like this! For this being your first one, it's really good! Now if only you had've added Sasuke to the mix..._ But I don't think you like Sasuke...
ichigo of the sea chapter 1 . 10/20/2008
um...lets see...well there's only one person i can let borrow gaara thats NARUTO! neway...um this is my 15th reading of a narugaa lemon and so far its meh fav *looks at publish date* ... i have read this eailier but my mom grounded me...neway keep up on the good yaoi/lemon! *YAOI-FANGIRL NOSEBLEED TO DA MAX!*
Dee-Dee45 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I loved it! only thing is the 'racoon' bits kept giving me silly images *giggles* naruto and a racoon hehe! XD
Writer-Y chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
oh my dear god. i was shaking my heart was pounding and i lost myself for a moment...okay a good while! it was awesome
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