|Reviews for The sand keeps falling from heaven|
| kandita chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
This is getting interesting and then u don't update anymore:(! Please update
| RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
i like this so far. are there going to be more chapters?
| Pale18 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
What happens next. Please update soon!
| BetweenTheSeaAndStars chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Hmm. Well done. Interesting and all in believable character.
| dk chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
good but you got the pov's messed up one moment it was over view ant the next hinata's pov in the same papagraph grate story thoght update soon
| byakuganroxmysox chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
AH! MAKE ONATHA CHAPPIE PLEZ :)
| wolfchik chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
omg! update soon Kenji no Mekiko-san! it has a almost flawless outline and gaaras' timing could'nt have been more perfect! but the first few paragraphs could use some work on her past. it doesn't really make much sense to some readers but besides that it was perfect! thank you for taking the time to read this message!ciao!
| demon scream chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Intresting. I hope Hinata doesn't freak out. She did see Gaara kill before in the chunnin exams but then again I'm just stateing what you already know. I'll stop blabbing now and say I'll be waiting for the next chapt.