Reviews for Life Is Not All Fun and Games
missmcweir chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
It's actually a really cute story, and the style is a lot better than the somewhat awkward formating and the mistakes in Caps/Noncaps let on at first. If you rework it a little, it will be a really nice vignette that captures the characters very well... Reworking also means removing the (laughters) in brackets and add them in some other way. Thanks for sharing!
Samantha Rice chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Wow. Is this supposed to be a one-shot? If it is I can tell you right now it should not remain so. (sorry I don't really remember what reveiws say. I just use them to decide wether or not to read a story. If it has nothing to do with the original story I do not read it.)
forlornromanticist chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
aw that was cute .